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Bride Of Frankenstein

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Bride Of Frankenstein

I have a favor to ask of you, Dr. Frankenstein
because this monster needs her mate
please give him strong arms to hold me with
gentle eyes that are electrifying to look into
tender lips with a kiss to die for
give him soft hair that I could run my fingers through
hands like Percy Shelley, so he could write poetry for me
feet like Fred Astaire, so he could sweep me off of mine
give him a sweet voice that could sing me to sleep
and of course, the most important part, a true and loving heart.
I know that no man is perfect, but this is as close as it gets.
Is this too much to ask?

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  1. Date: 7/1/2014 5:54:00 PM
    Nice Kelly. I like your description of the perfect man. Well done... Congratulations on winning in the contest... Verlena

    Deschler Avatar Kelly Deschler
    Date: 7/4/2014 1:10:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you for taking the time to read my poem, Verlena. I really appreciate your nice comments and the kind congrats!
  1. Date: 6/27/2014 4:57:00 AM
    Not at all Kelly, nice write....

    Deschler Avatar Kelly Deschler
    Date: 6/30/2014 5:35:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    I didn't think so, either ;) ....Thank you for the kind comments, Herzel. I appreciate it very much!
  1. Date: 6/27/2014 3:16:00 AM
    Enjoyable read, Kelly! It is not too much to ask for...eventually one has to settle for what s/he gets...might not get it all, but could be surprised by other simpler yet worthier gifts! // paul

    Deschler Avatar Kelly Deschler
    Date: 6/30/2014 4:57:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    I agree, Paul. Eventually, we do have to settle for what we get, and usually that turns out to be everything we ever needed!.... I'm glad you enjoyed this poem, it was a fun one to write! Thank you for the great comments and the kind congrats! :)
    Callus Avatar Paul Callus
    Date: 6/27/2014 3:17:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    ....Ohh...congratulations :)))
  1. Date: 6/26/2014 9:06:00 AM
    Hi Kelly, I love this poem - this is a reflection of knowing what you want. It is better to start with the ideal man and hopefully we'll get one who comes close to it::-). Congratulations on your well-deserved win in the contest! Warmest regards.

    Deschler Avatar Kelly Deschler
    Date: 6/29/2014 1:49:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    I agree Pandita, every girl dreams of their ideal man, but no man is perfect. Eventually, we do learn that and find out they are all we really need, and nothing else matters.... Thank you for the great comments and kind congrats. I appreciate it so much!
  1. Date: 6/26/2014 2:09:00 AM
    Enjoyed the poem with the morning cup of tea. Congrats on the win

    Deschler Avatar Kelly Deschler
    Date: 6/29/2014 1:33:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you, Dr. Ram. I'm glad that you enjoyed reading my poem on Thursday morning!
  1. Date: 6/25/2014 11:47:00 PM
    Kelly, , Congratulations:) Enjoyed every winning poem, on my list. Thanks for the support. If you like, stop by my latest blog "Poetic symphony" OR My Newest poem, THE NEW POET." It's a sweet dedication to every old and new poet. I've come in contact, since March 2010. LOVE ~LINDA

  1. Date: 10/14/2013 12:04:00 PM
    Cute after all if frankenstein is a man of the best parts of other men why not get what you most desire as his bride, it can become the made to order groom. lol

  1. Date: 9/20/2013 2:07:00 AM
    you should ask the early got father for this wish. . . lols next would be shrek i think huh. . .

  1. Date: 9/10/2013 2:15:00 PM
    CAN I PUT AN ORDER IN MR FRANK PLEASE EXCELLENT GOT A BIG SMILE FROM ME

  1. Date: 9/9/2013 7:34:00 PM
    I think it's reasonable. :o) Nice write!