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indestined

so many times beneath the stars
our lives are lived for fate and scars
infancy seems to abound
from everywhere it screams its sound
too loud to hear the voices true
without a sound, it comes to you
it strikes with force, a fist, a roar!
so strong a warmth you can't ignore
the vision marred by human sense
for now the journey must commence
the trials begin with fervor rise
a gaze glares straight within the eyes
so hard to suffer ends defeat
victories are ever sweet
the sky preludes the next advance
all surety, no happenstance
a place of firm and solid lore
where the light and night I wore
as symbols of forever more
no longer will I toil and chore

-Sam Robinson

Poem genesis from:
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by Poet Destroyer A

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  1. Date: 9/18/2013 2:15:00 PM
    Samuel, congratulations ............ luv ~SKAT~

    Robinson Avatar Samuel Robinson
    Date: 9/19/2013 11:50:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks :D
  1. Date: 9/14/2013 10:22:00 AM
    nicely penned, congrats on your win :)

  1. Date: 9/13/2013 9:24:00 PM
    Hi Samuel, stopping by this one again... --A beautiful poem and line... from me...congratulations :-)...xox~ LINDA

    Robinson Avatar Samuel Robinson
    Date: 9/16/2013 7:36:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    It does fit right in!
  1. Date: 9/13/2013 9:05:00 AM
    Congrats on the win in the contest, samuel

  1. Date: 9/13/2013 9:02:00 AM
    You are talented, thanks for entering my contest.

  1. Date: 9/12/2013 3:50:00 PM
    Great piece; only hiccups I feel are in line 3 and the last line; "chore" feels a little flat. It fits of course, but it just doesn't feel like a strong ending. I would suggest perhaps changing the wording a bit, to smooth it out and make it stronger. But I really enjoy your style; you have excellent rhymes and phrases throughout :)

  1. Date: 9/11/2013 8:47:00 AM
    Poetry so well scripted in infinite wisdom...favorite lines "it strikes with force, a fist, a roar!,so strong a warmth you can't ignore" "

    Robinson Avatar Samuel Robinson
    Date: 9/11/2013 2:06:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    I like having those words come in bold out of nowhere...
  1. Date: 9/11/2013 8:40:00 AM
    Sam, I enjoyed the fierce rise of your words... hope you accomplish the perfect destination.... a new favorite poem... thanks... xox...Linda

    Robinson Avatar Samuel Robinson
    Date: 9/11/2013 2:03:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks for the great line!
  1. Date: 9/9/2013 3:15:00 PM
    Enjoyed reading your work this afternoon..If for a contest, it should do well..Sara