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Young Heart That Once Broke Apart

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Young Heart That Once Broke Apart

My heart begins to pound
Like raindrops, collapsing on my roof
My heart begins to thump
Like the drums – making rhythm in the night

From my youth,
I knew no goodness
Teach me His truth,
So that I will someday meet success
From my youth,
I knew nothing at first
Teach me Your truth,
Or I’ll be left to thirst
On my own…please see me through
The pane…the pain sticks to me like glue

I had an active and cheerful heart 
But, evilness cruelly broke it apart
And who’s the one to blame – well, me
I had an innocent and naïve soul,
But agony and shame took its toll
It’s sad, but it’s all true
I hear my heart beat – my heart bleeds blue

And…now I call
Him…who mends us all

My heart skips a beat…
I have shaky, nervous feet
As if I was about to perform on stage,
However, I won’t dread it…
I won’t sweat it

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