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Is it Going to Rain

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Is it Going to Rain

The wind calls your name
Dark clouds on the plain
Gusty wind in my heart
Blowing us apart

Is it going to rain?
Can you fell my pain?
Is it going to rain?
I think I’m going insane?
Tell me is it going rain?

Calm before the storm
Chance upon a breeze
Whisper in the night
I want to hold you tight?

I can feel the weather 
In my bones
It’s telling me 
I’ll be alone 

Tell me is it going to rain?
Tell me can you feel my pain?

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  1. Date: 1/31/2014 7:42:00 AM

    wonderful and impressive write and congrats on the win, Stephen

  1. Date: 1/28/2014 1:10:00 PM

    Stephen, <3<3*CONGRATULATIONS, I THANK YOU VERY MUCH FOR ENTERING MY CONTEST. Take care ~SKAT~

    Kilmer Avatar Stephen Kilmer Date: 1/28/2014 4:20:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks SKAT, I am honored! I appreciate your support of my work. ~Kilmer
  1. Date: 9/9/2013 11:09:00 AM

    - Although I do not like the rain ..... this was beautiful, Stephen. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

  1. Date: 9/8/2013 8:58:00 PM

    Lovely write kilmer,,,, a sweet melody in every line:0) ty4sharing <3 cherie,,,,

    Kilmer Avatar Stephen Kilmer Date: 9/8/2013 9:00:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks Cherie. Your comments mean so much to me. I hope to make it into a country song and record it soon. Always ~Kilmer
  1. Date: 9/8/2013 8:09:00 PM

    Your keyboard must have been sizzling when you wrote this.~ Stunning ~ Intoxicating~ caliente ~ Going in my faves :)

    Kilmer Avatar Stephen Kilmer Date: 9/8/2013 8:28:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Well with that review I shall pursue it to fruition. Thanks for the vote of confidence. ~Kilmer
    Anglesey Avatar Karen Anglesey Date: 9/8/2013 8:23:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    It's simply beautiful with sweet emotion that evokes deep feelings. Sounds like a hit to me :)
    Kilmer Avatar Stephen Kilmer Date: 9/8/2013 8:16:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    I was thinking about a love song that was maybe a little country. I was definitely thinking about unrequited love. If you know what i mean ;). I just put some chords to it on the guitar and if I could sing (which I can't) it might be a hit (or a least in my dreams). ~Kilmer~