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  1. Date: 9/18/2013 4:57:00 PM

    All those paintings were as dark as death. Fabulous artist, however, I wouldn't want to hang one over my sofa !!! :) Love your depiction!!

  1. Date: 9/11/2013 9:17:00 AM

    Exceptional Debbie, adding to my favorites.

  1. Date: 9/10/2013 9:25:00 PM

    Fantastic writing. Describing a painting without a description is no easy task... Jack

  1. Date: 9/10/2013 4:58:00 PM

    AEWSOME stuff, Debs. Look how I just spelled that word. I am falling asleep at the keyboard. I know that I will lay down to rest and won't even be able to sleep. Such a dilemma is my sleepy time life!! Love the title on this too!! I'm watching Ray Donovan after Dexter, and the Irish has called his black son, Black Irish!

  1. Date: 9/10/2013 7:27:00 AM

    I love the title of the poem.So powerful this is..What doesn t kill us makes us stronger.. I love the last line 'Lay.me not across the landscape of your desires'..says so much.

  1. Date: 9/10/2013 7:22:00 AM

    Hi dear Deborah..I took your advice and swapped verses..re my magnolia poem..It sounds much better and complete..I even adjusted the spaces.Your input was greatly appreciated dear.Sand-wish (in my mind) is a wish made on the sand..and it is ephimeral indeed..as a sancastle is. Re contest-You know im scared of contests dear but tnks anyways. Re jet pkane i was thinking about september 11th and the loss of someone special before last goodbyes are uttered but its only thiughts..I cant put 2 paper