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  1. Date: 10/26/2013 11:30:00 AM

    I picture God holding a large fishing post,,, and Not A ROD...lol... soup mail...LINDA

  1. Date: 10/14/2013 8:38:00 PM

    re-read my ALICE sweet ALICE poem... gave it some touch ups... hope you enjoy it... LINDA

  1. Date: 9/18/2013 10:03:00 AM

    yes we are all in God's little fish tank... LOL, I wonder what school many travel in. Have you ever seen,, Finding NEMO... lol..I heard it's an evil cartoon... Fish that don't listen to their parents... and so on and so on... did you know... NEMO is OMEN backwards. And that is why, I keep my kids away from such a movie. JK... i watched it over and over... Keep On Swimming! Keep On Swimming! :-).:-)

  1. Date: 9/16/2013 6:26:00 PM

    DEEP, Scribe!!!! The good perish with the bad, unfortunately.

  1. Date: 9/12/2013 8:13:00 AM

    Whoa Scribe, you really know how to turn the turbines of our minds. Now I've started thinking about the bait, small fish, big fish and the fisherman -yikes! Very well penned.

    ML Avatar Scribe ML Date: 9/12/2013 1:46:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks Vicky... Since the Old Testament God has authorized the slaying of those he felt was disobedient. Since his thoughts are afar from ours, he might love war, sacrifice, etc. We have no clue!
  1. Date: 9/11/2013 9:55:00 AM

    Really enjoyed this thought provoking piece...its pretty scary as you say to watch the free choices people make..choices given to love or hate....great write!

    ML Avatar Scribe ML Date: 9/12/2013 1:47:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you poet! I appreciate you!
  1. Date: 9/10/2013 1:33:00 PM

    What an eye opening piece you've created here. Makes the average person think of where they actually belong..Inside or Outside looking in. Certainly to evaluate ones life...Above all, the creator is observing both..Excellent fam...excellent

    ML Avatar Scribe ML Date: 9/10/2013 4:28:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    The ozone layer has us trapped, might as well enjoy the view...Thanks for the support family!
  1. Date: 9/10/2013 1:32:00 PM

    how imaginative can you get, scribe.. i was thrown off my chair!... i love eating the belly part of the fish, though.. now, i have to think about it, lol.. awesome you!..:) huggs

    ML Avatar Scribe ML Date: 9/10/2013 4:26:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Stay tuned Nette, I'll come up with something, buy you have to remain seated : )...Thanks for always being kind!
  1. Date: 9/10/2013 5:46:00 AM

    Interesting creator, a little scary maybe? Awesome piece to sit and consider, I've now read it at least 5 times.

    ML Avatar Scribe ML Date: 9/10/2013 4:23:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Life can be scary, to be used as pawns, scarier. Thanks for the visit and the appreciation of my work!
  1. Date: 9/9/2013 9:38:00 AM

    Oh to be a poet such as you, can we change the world?, with poetry like this one day we may!,,, you deliver one hell of a statement....

    ML Avatar Scribe ML Date: 9/9/2013 6:45:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks Harry! Your comment floored me!
  1. Date: 9/9/2013 8:24:00 AM

    I challenge you to give me a topic or title to write about.... come on come on..you want a poem, give me a theme. I'll work on it tonight. ... luv...linda

  1. Date: 9/8/2013 3:42:00 PM

    Our creator can see it all..Our greediness..Our giving..the mal use of power..the big fish swollowing whole the little fishes..Very clever

    ML Avatar Scribe ML Date: 9/9/2013 6:45:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks Charmaine! You see through the tank clearly, my friend!
  1. Date: 9/8/2013 11:34:00 AM

    We can learn much from a scool of fish, Much more from the creator, love peace light xxx

    ML Avatar Scribe ML Date: 9/9/2013 6:48:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks Mystic Rose! We have a lot we could learn, if we just listen!
  1. Date: 9/8/2013 9:22:00 AM

    about your poem.. I want out of the tank, maybe then I can hide from the creator of all creations. by the way I would like to know more of your thoughts here. interesting.... always... Linda

    ML Avatar Scribe ML Date: 9/8/2013 10:20:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Lol...Me too. Thanks Linda!
    A  Avatar Poet Destroyer A Date: 9/8/2013 9:22:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    ps...I don't swim schools.. I was like Nemo doing my own thing.. :-) :-)
  1. Date: 9/8/2013 9:17:00 AM

    I only bother he or she I adore, and feel close tooooo... Please take this harassment as a compliment.... hahahahahah hugs... Linda

    ML Avatar Scribe ML Date: 9/8/2013 10:19:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Ditto!
  1. Date: 9/8/2013 8:41:00 AM

    Deep & much left for interpretation. A huge reality check.

    ML Avatar Scribe ML Date: 9/8/2013 10:18:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks Drake! Something is watching!
  1. Date: 9/8/2013 8:35:00 AM

    Another interesting write Marlon, I reckon he is always busy in the background trying to see how far us as humans will take this greed frenzy that's going on at the moment :) thank you for your comments on my older writes. Welcome to my twin :)

    ML Avatar Scribe ML Date: 9/8/2013 10:17:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks Wilma... When I can't sleep, you see where my brain be!
  1. Date: 9/8/2013 7:11:00 AM

    nicely penned Scribe....It sound like war though "warmongers are nil"...best wishes

    ML Avatar Scribe ML Date: 9/8/2013 7:20:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks Joseph! You're right on the money!
  1. Date: 9/8/2013 5:55:00 AM

    and I wonder just what does that creator think... excellent thoughts, Marlon. Soupmail. hugs, Catie :)

    ML Avatar Scribe ML Date: 9/8/2013 6:53:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you, Catie! Never know what he thinks, he's authorized a lot of wars in the Old Testament!