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  1. Date: 10/14/2013 9:40:00 PM
    Excellent poem. Circumstance in play too. How fair are you my lady, to see, in bright youthfulness regaled. Impatient too, in tasting the brew of love's sweet nectar un-assailed. Yet, unfolding strife in everyday life brings betrayal to disappoint. Turns your dream into a shabby thing; A drama in eerie dis-joint. Straight and strong your man has grown; industrious, fast, and free. He stands at the helm to conquer his realm; to triumph in his destiny. Then breaks the dawn, with a muffled moanETC

  1. Date: 9/11/2013 3:09:00 AM
    you pick up the simple events around us and give them a tune in your own way.I enjoyed your write very much...***LITAN***

  1. Date: 9/9/2013 3:41:00 PM
    Wonderful poem, Becca! This is filled with good, honest advice, that many of us should take to heart. A beautiful message in this one! Fantastic work!...Thank you for the nice comments. I really appreciate it!

  1. Date: 9/8/2013 4:48:00 PM
    Hope, an odd word sometimes, 'Shall I cross this road, look left, look right, look left again before stepping off, or shall i just blunder across and hope I make it. A great write Becca, for the followers of this world. Take care, Richard

  1. Date: 9/8/2013 1:29:00 PM
    A sad one Becca. No one is allowed to be sad on my birthday. I send happy thoughts to you. Hugs Rick.

  1. Date: 9/8/2013 11:17:00 AM
    Well-expressed sentiments about the human condition. And I much agree: many truths contained within. Kudos, Becca! :)

  1. Date: 9/8/2013 10:56:00 AM
    Yes I must echo all here by saying this is a wonderful poem! Honest and true your words interlace together and form a very good piece of work -Very Good!!! MC

  1. Date: 9/8/2013 9:31:00 AM
    Awesome piece Becca filled with so much truth as well. you made me reflect with gem of yours. Always a good when that happens. Hope you are having a pleasant weekend my friend. *hugs*

  1. Date: 9/8/2013 8:33:00 AM
    Quite, quite true. I believe, through life's trials that can cause us to be lost, that's why we have the be reminded which way to go...forward & ready for a new day.

  1. Date: 9/8/2013 7:34:00 AM
    Becca...this is one of your absolute BEST! You are a wonderful writer, I know...but this...this just gives your message in such a wonderful and awesome way! Beautiful and amazing!!!! I'm faving it! HUGS!

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    Date: 9/8/2013 7:37:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    I'm not indifferent to the pain in the lines, Becca....Yes, I've felt much of what you write....but as Shadow says, HOPE springs eternal! Sending you love....sweetie!
  1. Date: 9/8/2013 7:08:00 AM
    You have poured your heart out my dear Becca and I'm now beginning to know you and the pain you are enduring. Always be assured I'll be here for you whenever you need me! Love, Jack xoxox

  1. Date: 9/8/2013 5:52:00 AM
    You speak of facts and truths my friend, this is certainly the way it is and there is really nothing we can do about it! Hopefully we all have the strength to carry on through all times of struggle and pain, and hope will spring forth as a prevailing factor! I just love your analogies and metaphors, you have written a truly wondrous poem here this morning, such a grandiose piece, Great work!!

  1. Date: 9/8/2013 5:23:00 AM
    An amazing write. yes we all go through times of great distress, but we must remain hopeful. Time does help to heal. My friend, you speak of many universal truths. take care. Rick

  1. Date: 9/8/2013 5:16:00 AM
    Becca hope always springs eternal we just need to open our eyes to see it. Not easy I know when one is suffering loss. Your poem speaks in volumes of pain and yet is still an exquiste write Shadow x smile