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away. . . time is ticking - if I listen closely I can hear it; in the distance a horn's mournful notes have begun to play - forlornness wafting to my ear cannot drown what I fear. . . sweet life t r i c k l i n g a w a y Based on Visual #2 Written by Andrea Dietrich on 9/6/13 for The Just Nine Lines! Poetry Contest of nette onclaud

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  1. Date: 11/2/2013 9:32:00 PM

    I'm not familiar with this style. You have such a diverse poetic talent. Well done.

  1. Date: 9/19/2013 9:28:00 AM

    I must try this form. Remember that I told you I would have my house paid for it I reached 105. So, I will do it because I've shut down all the clocks. There will be no ticking away for this kid. Love, daver

    austin Avatar daver austin Date: 9/19/2013 9:30:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    And by the way - this is one helluva good poem. More love, daver
  1. Date: 9/14/2013 8:23:00 PM

    Congratulations Petal, nine meaningful lines, talking of time it's 3.21 a.m here, I must be mad reading your poems at this time night or is it morning lol. Goodnight and take care, Richard

  1. Date: 9/13/2013 10:11:00 AM

    a nice winning poem ..... always love LINDA

  1. Date: 9/12/2013 10:32:00 AM

    As we lament of times we spent living the life we're given. Remember to stay in the present for that's where we are livin'. :)

  1. Date: 9/12/2013 9:41:00 AM

    great writing, as usual. makes me think I'd be better off just claiming your rejects.... Girl, you really know what pen and ink are for..... Jake

  1. Date: 9/12/2013 8:13:00 AM

    awesome Andrea..... congrats ~SKAT~

  1. Date: 9/11/2013 8:55:00 PM

    Great write, Andrea! I really like how you spaced the letters at the end for emphasis. Congrats on your win! Love, Kim

  1. Date: 9/11/2013 8:23:00 PM

    Congrats on your win. Morgan

  1. Date: 9/11/2013 6:13:00 AM

    andie... a languid sway of artwords.. congrats on your win and thank you for checking my blog.. :) huggs

  1. Date: 9/11/2013 2:17:00 AM

    Congrat on such a beauty ..Well deserved win : ) Do you remember when i entered your contest about three yrs ago?Im entering another at lasy..Trying to remove the phobia i have for competitions : )..after 3yr..lol

  1. Date: 9/10/2013 11:00:00 PM

    Many congrats dear friend for this win. Well done Andrea.

  1. Date: 9/10/2013 8:23:00 PM

    beautifully done Andrea...congrats on your win :)

  1. Date: 9/10/2013 6:03:00 PM

    That is why it's important to live each day to it's fullest....terrific write Andrea! Congrats on your win! Hugs

  1. Date: 9/10/2013 4:44:00 PM

    This one is very sad but well expressed. Congratulations.

  1. Date: 9/10/2013 12:26:00 AM

    Hi, my very dear friend Andrea! This is a perfect poem and form. So delightful to read this afternoon while having my siesta time in school without the kids around ;))) I love it and enjoyed it so much. Thanks a lot for sharing and good luck and best wishes always! love lots, Leonora

  1. Date: 9/9/2013 3:47:00 PM

    Oh time! Yep, it trickles away doesn't it? Kind of the way your poem trickles away...you can do a lot with a little, Andrea.

  1. Date: 9/9/2013 1:46:00 PM

    Andrea....Andrea...amazing, awesome, astounding! LOVED it! To my favs...Yes...just how I feel about life. Where did all the time go...My daughter will turn 19 next month! 19!!!! WOW!!! Beautiful write!

    Dietrich Avatar Andrea Dietrich Date: 9/9/2013 2:38:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Yeah, better than for me. MY daughter turns 38 this month!!! UGGGG Means I am really getting up there!!!
  1. Date: 9/9/2013 11:53:00 AM

    Oh! how beautiful the line is"Sweet life tickling away". I agree with my lovely friend Harry. Good luck in the contest. Loved always, bl

  1. Date: 9/9/2013 9:56:00 AM

    Shades of your prowess here Andrea, so inspirational, such a joy to read you are,,,,,,

  1. Date: 9/9/2013 4:28:00 AM

    Hi Andrea! back again at your page, reading this very nice "Rictameter" of yours. Really feels good to be back after long...how've you been doing?

  1. Date: 9/9/2013 4:11:00 AM

    YOU PLAY THE TUNE OF TIME BEAUTIFUL

  1. Date: 9/8/2013 11:00:00 PM

    Good poem

  1. Date: 9/8/2013 9:18:00 PM

    Yeah I think I hear it sometimes..great one Andrea....:-)

  1. Date: 9/8/2013 5:03:00 PM

    And when you get older, how very much faster it ticks away, good write Andrea....Peter

  1. Date: 9/8/2013 4:29:00 PM

    Reads like a winner to me..Way to go..Thanks for the visit by my pumpkin..Good to know that you like pumpkin seeds..Sara

  1. Date: 9/8/2013 4:21:00 PM

    in Re; to your question.. I work for a monthly magazine put out by Spectrum Publications. It's a local deal-eo... I used to be a journalist for a newspaper and they started a magazine. I used to send Frank H. each issue of em, but I'm slipping now. LOL

  1. Date: 9/8/2013 4:03:00 PM

    This uis good Andrea. I like it. Thanks for sharing and good luck in the contest..... Lucilla

  1. Date: 9/8/2013 4:00:00 PM

    LOL I never have been any good at following directions!!! YES I will do another, the third times the charm XXXOOO L & L

  1. Date: 9/8/2013 3:27:00 PM

    EXCELLENT PIECE FLOWED OF THE PAGE BEAUTIFUL

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