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Belladonna

As I draw upon my last breath. 
I kiss her lips and wait.

I watch the carnival of lost souls.
Watch them all in their caravan.

On my weak body, I lay her hand.
How we laughed and played thru 
the meadows of our heaven.

Though I have faith in the night.
My tear filled skin is soaked to the bone.

Love should not be, if it feels like this.
I should let the devil dance upon my grave.

"If it is true I never see you in the light of day again.
I shall be lost to the darkness forever more.

Belladonna, my love,  do not leave me now.
I cannot bare to lose you this day.

There would be no life in this body.
If I did not have your love and kindness
bestowed upon me .  





9/ 6/ 2013  fri     listening to gothic music 

Belladonna is Latin for “beautiful lady”.

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  1. Date: 10/27/2013 7:29:00 PM

    yes it makes the goosebumps sway babe....

  1. Date: 10/18/2013 5:57:00 PM

    I love this poem, Debbie! It almost reads like a vampire story. It has those gothic elements, yet there is a deep sadness within this poem. Excellent work!...By the way, I smiled at your note, "listening to gothic music". That sounds like me, too!...Thank you for the great comments. Sorry, I missed your birthday! :)

  1. Date: 10/18/2013 9:16:00 AM

    I forgot to say I really enjoyed reading this poem Belladonna. Thank you Debbie.

  1. Date: 10/18/2013 9:09:00 AM

    This reminds me of my wife's passing. Everything I know of love I learned from her. The final lesson was that I should share what I Learned from her with the world and carry on.

  1. Date: 9/16/2013 1:48:00 AM

    watch someone leaving is always heartbreaking.especially when even the heart leaves too..Sad and beautiful ..Tnks for stopping by my humble verse.

  1. Date: 9/15/2013 7:47:00 PM

    Passions saddening beauty lies within these lines and it has a beauty to itself alone nicely expressed here love it. cheri

  1. Date: 9/15/2013 7:44:00 AM

    Hey--thanks for visiting. You are always an inspiration. Also, art museums are a lot like collections of poetry. We get to see just a little bit of how others perceive the world. Almost like getting into the brain of the artist as much as we can possibly do.

  1. Date: 9/15/2013 1:15:00 AM

    as always more powerful in each and every poem xxxx duncan

  1. Date: 9/12/2013 9:51:00 AM

    Great inspiration here Debbie, enjoyed my reading today :) thanks for visiting in my page before :D wishing you a wonderful day :D hug, yanny

  1. Date: 9/8/2013 6:50:00 PM

    Lovely composure, enjoyed xxx

  1. Date: 9/8/2013 2:26:00 PM

    Hi Debbie, A well crafted mystical write. Ken

  1. Date: 9/7/2013 11:41:00 PM

    I was trying to think of carnival of lost souls as I read this. It made me feel like that old movie, so sad and haunting.

  1. Date: 9/7/2013 8:03:00 PM

    Nice , touchy and passionate poem

  1. Date: 9/7/2013 4:02:00 PM

    Debbie, one of the prettiest poems I've read today. a deep and sad write... enjoyed very much... I had no idea you enjoyed Gothic music.. xox..Love Linda

  1. Date: 9/7/2013 1:59:00 PM

    Outstanding poem here Debbie, well done!! Hugs and love, Gail

  1. Date: 9/7/2013 1:01:00 PM

    - Debbie (Belladonna), a poem that is touching and beautiful at the same time - Have a great weekend! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

  1. Date: 9/7/2013 9:48:00 AM

    This is excellent and an eloquent mix between subtle passion and musical inspiration. Favorite line "I watch the carnival of lost souls. Watch them all in their caravan". Captivating write :)

  1. Date: 9/7/2013 9:35:00 AM

    Debby, love does make life so much more. I was not built to be a go-it-alone soul so I know what inspires you. Thanks for all your comments and know you bring a dividend of pleasantness into my life. Thanks