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RICH-HEART

For Richard Lamoureux's "Any line" contest.  


Richard Seale-d Door's line:  slammed shut are the doors in "A mind made up".


You told me before
slammed shut are the doors
when my love for you went astray
I got my comeuppance
he's worth not a tuppence
and rumor has it he's gay

Lest I've need of another  
visit to me brother
sometime for a quick howdy-do
or longing for discourse
in code as of Morse
on the stealth oiled a hinge, p'haps two

Ah, found me a crack
Leech-a is back 
my love for the other's dissipated 
you smile goodly, warmly
longingly, lovingly
my return welcome and anticipated 

Delysia Hendricks 


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  1. Date: 10/11/2013 2:28:00 AM

    It's nice and flows like a song. Good work Licia! G.

  1. Date: 10/3/2013 10:28:00 PM

    Just passing thru and thought I'd say hello!!

  1. Date: 9/28/2013 10:47:00 PM

    Rereading this one. It sure does have some funny lines in it!!!

  1. Date: 9/27/2013 6:56:00 PM

    Hey, congratulations, so pleased to see this in winners list, RICHly deserved lol. Glad to be of assistance haha. Take care, Richard and thank you

  1. Date: 9/21/2013 1:13:00 AM

    How nice to see this one finally. And you won with it. BIG congrats for your well deserved win. It was fun seeing the line you decided to emulate.

  1. Date: 9/18/2013 2:11:00 PM

    Delysia.......this is a lovely win..... luv ~SKAT~

  1. Date: 9/17/2013 6:03:00 PM

    I'm certainly not gay I'll have you know!...Hilarious as is your usual and if this don't place first I'm gonna file a protest...Not sure who TO yet but I will file nonetheless - Tim

  1. Date: 9/15/2013 5:14:00 PM

    Great poem inspired by a line from another poet. Lovely and very matter of fact ...congratulations on your win :)

  1. Date: 9/15/2013 1:21:00 PM

    Beautifully done Delysia. I like it my friend.

  1. Date: 9/15/2013 8:31:00 AM

    I believe I owe you a congratulatory note... this be it! Congrats dear Delysia! Love and hugs, Jack xoxoxox

  1. Date: 9/14/2013 4:18:00 PM

    dropping by to say hello.

  1. Date: 9/14/2013 12:47:00 PM

    Loved it again....congratulations!!!! And love your pic....

  1. Date: 9/14/2013 7:30:00 AM

    nicely penned...congrats on your win!

  1. Date: 9/13/2013 8:29:00 PM

    Hi Sweet Delysia, --A beautiful poem and line... congratulations :-)...xox~ LINDA

  1. Date: 9/13/2013 1:35:00 PM

    This is really good and great for the contest. Thanks for sharing.... lucilla

  1. Date: 9/13/2013 10:40:00 AM

    Congratulations on your winning place Delysia xx

  1. Date: 9/13/2013 8:57:00 AM

    Congrats on the win in the contest, Delysia

  1. Date: 9/13/2013 8:46:00 AM

    This one made me smile. Thanks for entering my contest.

  1. Date: 9/12/2013 9:23:00 PM

    Outstanding !!

  1. Date: 9/12/2013 8:49:00 PM

    Hey-hey! Look who's back! So happy to see you again. So nice of you to stop by. :o)

  1. Date: 9/10/2013 7:53:00 PM

    Excellent use of Richard's line, excellent poem...!

  1. Date: 9/8/2013 10:55:00 AM

    Girl; This is good. I love it and it will do good in the contest. Thanks for sharing. ...Lucilla

  1. Date: 9/7/2013 3:35:00 PM

    :0) Thanks for supporting my contest!

  1. Date: 9/7/2013 3:33:00 PM

    Hello Delysia, For some reason the first visuals that came to my mind were of a bad relationship. An excellent piece to go with Richard's line. I can't seem to stop reading your poem. I honestly read it 3 times. Made a lot of sense out of something you picked from one fine line. awesome, and thanks so much for being the lovely poet you are... Good Luck In the contest... Linda

  1. Date: 9/7/2013 2:39:00 PM

    Hi Sis, I am honoured you've chosen one of my lines for this contest.You did tell me you'd steal one sooner or later lol. You should have taken my advice. Yes, I told you before, To slam that door, And tell him to be on his way, He was no good for you, See my words were true, Likes your parting shot, rumour he’s gay. Good luck in the contest Licia. Take care, Richard

  1. Date: 9/7/2013 1:11:00 PM

    - Oh ... very good poem, Delysia !!!!! - Luck in contest ! - Have a great weekend! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

  1. Date: 9/7/2013 1:06:00 PM

    Hey you....the poem is AMAZING...Girl, you got to brush up on your Morse Code cause I read you like a book! Yea...my insight is KEEN! So, Mr Seal is the inspiration behind this write...He is inspiring! I'm sure he will be flattered no end...Thanks for all the visits. I'll forgive yo for going MIA... Your posts were stupendous.....thanks!