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Stick in the Mud

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Stick in the Mud

You filthy rodent
Why did you eat up my plants?
You're a stubborn pest

You stick in the mud
Why did you chew up my crops?
You're very naughty!

Shame on you, silly, hairless rodent!
Remind me to buy some chicken wire or rodent traps!

4/26/13
Dedicated to a church friend by the name of Pearl 
She has a big front yard and a huge back yard

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  1. Date: 9/7/2013 9:37:00 AM
    David, good to see you are writing. It's a shared world, but it is annoying when we try to set something up and the characters take it away. Gardening can be very challenging in that regard. Be well, sir!