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Dust

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Dust

Particles of dust
your spores visible in light
lightly coating all

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  1. Date: 9/8/2013 3:25:00 PM
    LOVELY LINDA I WILL GIVE YOU A RING TOMORROW JUST CANT TEXT ON THIS SITE SLOWLY I AM WORKING IT OUT

  1. Date: 9/8/2013 2:39:00 PM
    yes, that does define it!! Have you seen those documentaries showing the bacteria all around us? I bet spores are not very pleasant to see either! Soupmail.

    Hamilton Avatar Shadow Hamilton
    Date: 9/8/2013 2:51:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Trust me they are not. Very scarey in fact lol. ok will look ty for reading
  1. Date: 9/8/2013 7:14:00 AM
    It is everywhere. Never thought about it in this way.

    Hamilton Avatar Shadow Hamilton
    Date: 9/8/2013 2:50:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    hi Duke sometimes we need to think out of the box. Ty for your support of my work Shadow x smile
  1. Date: 9/7/2013 11:24:00 PM
    Wow yes, i hav always wantd to write about these dust particles dat glitter in sunlight. And u pennd a remarkable splendid haiku on it.

    Hamilton Avatar Shadow Hamilton
    Date: 9/8/2013 4:09:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Yes Dust so fine or gritty let your imagination take flight become one with it then try again theres so many ways to discribe dust gl. Ty for enjoying my attempt Shadow x smile
  1. Date: 9/6/2013 8:30:00 PM
    Interesting Haiku I enjoyed this! Laura :)

    Hamilton Avatar Shadow Hamilton
    Date: 9/7/2013 7:55:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    yes it is a bit lol ty for reading Shadow x smile