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Quote Left"A contented mind is the greatest blessing a man can enjoy in this world."Quote Right

by Joseph Addison

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  1. Date: 9/8/2013 11:51:00 AM
    Absolutely fabulous, Shadow...I really was touched by this truthful write...Yes, i try so hard not to be difficult with my 18 year old because I, myself, made my own mistakes. Thanks for the visits to my work! :) Hope all is well with you and your loved ones, my dear.

    Hamilton Avatar Shadow Hamilton
    Date: 9/8/2013 2:10:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    its easy to be wise in hindsight Eileen 18 is a tough age. Gl with him all good here now ty. glad you enjoyed it Shadow x smile
  1. Date: 9/8/2013 7:13:00 AM
    Shadow, I enjoyed reading this very much. You've raised a lot of questions about life in this piece. Parenting is a very strange position in this life of ours. How do we become who we are? Yet, I have to agree with you. In the end, you seem to be asking what is the meaning of life. This is very deep and fun to read.

    Hamilton Avatar Shadow Hamilton
    Date: 9/8/2013 2:06:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    hi Duke ty for your review What at the end I was trying to imply is that we come here naked and leave naked so all are born equal and die the same lol. Glad you enjoyed it Shadow x smile