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It Pulls You Under

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It Pulls You Under

 
© Rebecca L ~ September 2013



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  1. Date: 4/18/2014 7:30:00 PM

    I' ve been clicking on many of your poems trying to find a new one to comment on. Hope I can find one. I see you removed this one!! What happened??

  1. Date: 12/6/2013 6:49:00 AM

    Becca What a wonderful and intriguing write. I like how you used the wind and waves in such a descriptive and interesting way. The hidden meaning is creative and unique. Nice job Thanks for the sweet comment on my Life poem. Hugs

    L. Avatar Rebecca L. Date: 12/6/2013 7:31:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you, Robin! I'm glad you could see the underlying meaning... beneath the wind and waves :) Hugs <3
  1. Date: 9/16/2013 6:19:00 AM

    The imagery you've woven here really speaks to the soul Becca. Most eloquently penned, you're very gifted. A 7 from me.

    L. Avatar Rebecca L. Date: 9/17/2013 5:35:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you so much, Mustapha :)
  1. Date: 9/15/2013 10:52:00 AM

    I love the way you create an ambiance with your words and then, like few can, almost like a Hitchcock movie end it--but not really.

    L. Avatar Rebecca L. Date: 9/15/2013 3:35:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    "Almost like a Hitchcock movie end ... but not really" haha What a great comment, Craig, thank you! :D Nice to see you here. :D
  1. Date: 9/8/2013 11:18:00 AM

    Yeah, there are some underlying meanings here that will require another read or two, good work Becaa -making me read this poem multiple times LOL! MC

    L. Avatar Rebecca L. Date: 9/15/2013 3:34:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    haha MC !! If it gets you to read it several times then... mission accomplished :) lol
  1. Date: 9/7/2013 6:23:00 PM

    Beautiful. This is your 3rd poem I have read today and wow what a talent you are. I look forward to reading all your works as soon as I can. This poem needs to be read many times to comprehend the numerous themes running through it. Really good work.

    L. Avatar Rebecca L. Date: 9/15/2013 3:32:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you so much for reading my poems :) and for your kind comments
  1. Date: 9/7/2013 8:40:00 AM

    Wow Becca, i read many poems as much as i can, there are some that truly stand out, this is one of those

    L. Avatar Rebecca L. Date: 9/7/2013 10:34:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    wow, thank you so much, Harry! That means a lot to me!
  1. Date: 9/6/2013 11:19:00 PM

    the captha said Raby. haha. And now it's saying 9eaw, I imagine someone going "Ewww"

    L. Avatar Rebecca L. Date: 9/7/2013 3:39:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Those captchas are funny sometimes ;)
  1. Date: 9/6/2013 11:19:00 PM

    Awesome wind poem, Becca. I think there is a contest on poems about the wind, right?? I see this one going far!!

    L. Avatar Rebecca L. Date: 9/7/2013 3:38:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you Andrea, ... The wind contest is for a sonnet so I'd have to rewrite this a bit. :) The LOL below was for the captcha comment
    L. Avatar Rebecca L. Date: 9/7/2013 3:37:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    LOL :)
  1. Date: 9/6/2013 6:00:00 PM

    I like the changes you made to this, still waters run deep lol. Take care, Richard

    L. Avatar Rebecca L. Date: 9/6/2013 8:30:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you, Richard... I'm glad you like the changes.. and yes, they surely do :)
  1. Date: 9/6/2013 5:18:00 PM

    Love the flow and the uniqueness of your theme Becca. Nicely penned. Wishing you a great weekend. Hugs and love, Gail

    L. Avatar Rebecca L. Date: 9/6/2013 8:29:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Hi Gail! Thank you for stopping by :)
  1. Date: 9/6/2013 4:41:00 PM

    well written with good flow, I like how you've personified the wind here in its many different guises...thanks for stopping by with your uplifting comment :)

    L. Avatar Rebecca L. Date: 9/6/2013 8:27:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks Charlotte! I was happy to read your poem :) Thank you for reading mine too :)
  1. Date: 9/6/2013 3:13:00 PM

    Fantastic write, the only weather I dislike is wind. I really enjoyed your write.it was very readable indeed....Peter

    L. Avatar Rebecca L. Date: 9/6/2013 8:22:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Really, that's the only weather you dislike? That's awesome, Peter.. thanks for your comment :)
  1. Date: 9/6/2013 2:50:00 PM

    Yes! MESMERIZING as Miss Boop said! Such a beautiful write dear Becca! Hope your weekend is filled with happy times! Big big hugs dear Becca1 xoxoxox

    L. Avatar Rebecca L. Date: 9/6/2013 8:21:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thank you Jack! :) Hope you have a great weekend as well ...big hugs xoxox
  1. Date: 9/6/2013 1:49:00 PM

    Becca...mesmerizing. Hadn't you posted this a week or so ago? I read it before...Anyway, very interesting write...use of personification..excellent. Good job.

    L. Avatar Rebecca L. Date: 9/6/2013 1:53:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Yes Eileen, I posted it about a week ago and realized I wasn't quite happy with it... made a few changes ... Glad you found it interesting ;)
  1. Date: 9/6/2013 12:43:00 PM

    OH YOU CARESSED THE WORDS TREADING UPON WATER BEAUTIFUL

    L. Avatar Rebecca L. Date: 9/6/2013 1:51:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    :) thank you Liam