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  1. Date: 4/18/2014 7:30:00 PM
    I' ve been clicking on many of your poems trying to find a new one to comment on. Hope I can find one. I see you removed this one!! What happened??

  1. Date: 12/6/2013 6:49:00 AM
    Becca What a wonderful and intriguing write. I like how you used the wind and waves in such a descriptive and interesting way. The hidden meaning is creative and unique. Nice job Thanks for the sweet comment on my Life poem. Hugs

  1. Date: 9/16/2013 6:19:00 AM
    The imagery you've woven here really speaks to the soul Becca. Most eloquently penned, you're very gifted. A 7 from me.

  1. Date: 9/15/2013 10:52:00 AM
    I love the way you create an ambiance with your words and then, like few can, almost like a Hitchcock movie end it--but not really.

  1. Date: 9/8/2013 11:18:00 AM
    Yeah, there are some underlying meanings here that will require another read or two, good work Becaa -making me read this poem multiple times LOL! MC

  1. Date: 9/7/2013 6:23:00 PM
    Beautiful. This is your 3rd poem I have read today and wow what a talent you are. I look forward to reading all your works as soon as I can. This poem needs to be read many times to comprehend the numerous themes running through it. Really good work.

  1. Date: 9/7/2013 8:40:00 AM
    Wow Becca, i read many poems as much as i can, there are some that truly stand out, this is one of those

  1. Date: 9/6/2013 11:19:00 PM
    Awesome wind poem, Becca. I think there is a contest on poems about the wind, right?? I see this one going far!!

  1. Date: 9/6/2013 11:19:00 PM
    the captha said Raby. haha. And now it's saying 9eaw, I imagine someone going "Ewww"

  1. Date: 9/6/2013 6:00:00 PM
    I like the changes you made to this, still waters run deep lol. Take care, Richard

  1. Date: 9/6/2013 4:41:00 PM
    well written with good flow, I like how you've personified the wind here in its many different guises...thanks for stopping by with your uplifting comment :)

  1. Date: 9/6/2013 3:13:00 PM
    Fantastic write, the only weather I dislike is wind. I really enjoyed your write.it was very readable indeed....Peter

  1. Date: 9/6/2013 2:50:00 PM
    Yes! MESMERIZING as Miss Boop said! Such a beautiful write dear Becca! Hope your weekend is filled with happy times! Big big hugs dear Becca1 xoxoxox

  1. Date: 9/6/2013 1:49:00 PM
    Becca...mesmerizing. Hadn't you posted this a week or so ago? I read it before...Anyway, very interesting write...use of personification..excellent. Good job.

  1. Date: 9/6/2013 12:43:00 PM
    OH YOU CARESSED THE WORDS TREADING UPON WATER BEAUTIFUL