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Passion Unfurled

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Passion Unfurled

I must try to be coy
I must be demure	
Traits of a “good girl”
Oh, but what is the cure?

He’s driving me wild
I’m starting to melt
Oh heavens, oh me
How good his kiss felt

I’m going to die
I’m feeling so faint
My deep craving pounds
Does he think I’m a saint?

I wish he would hurry
I simply can’t wait
My burning hunger
He MUST satiate

HE started this madness
HE set me on fire
And now HE lingers
While I burn with desire

The permission he seeks
Is there in my eyes
My patience wears thin
Passion melts my disguise

I see his eyes linger
On my cherry lips
They take in the curve
Of voluptuous hips

I move in closer
Shaken by the thrill
But if it takes too long
I’ll go in for the kill

My need relentless
I must take a dare
Undoing each clasp
My breasts now lie bare

This is my moment
His passion unfurls
I’ll end on this note
I’m one happy girl!  

September 6, 2013
Dr Ram's Contest
Passion over Patience

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  1. Date: 9/8/2013 2:12:00 PM

    excellent love it GL in contest Shadow x smile

    Ghali Avatar Eileen Ghali Date: 9/10/2013 12:53:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    :) Thanks, Shadow! Kind of you! Hugs
  1. Date: 9/8/2013 12:04:00 AM

    Wow! Great one! The title drew me in, and I couldn't get out even if I wanted to! Very awesome one Eileen. :) Always, Laura

    Ghali Avatar Eileen Ghali Date: 9/10/2013 12:52:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    WOW! If that isn't the sweetest compliment ever! THAT is the goal of writing! Thank you! I will share this with my students in writing class! HUGS!
  1. Date: 9/7/2013 12:31:00 PM

    Attagirl, Queen of Passion. You've nailed this one real good. Hey, good luck in the contest with this strong entry. Kudos, Happy Girl. Licia (*__*)

    Ghali Avatar Eileen Ghali Date: 9/7/2013 12:58:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    I'm mad at you!!!! You've been MIA for some time, my dear...How dare you! Thanks for the visit. Queen of Passion...who would have thought! Nailed it, eh? Hmmmmm...HA HA HA...Never mind...won't go there. The happy girl in the poem thanks you! Yes...glad to know I've got the POWER! :)
  1. Date: 9/7/2013 12:25:00 PM

    Passion unfurled..Passion over patience and you expressed fire so well..Outstanding poem lady..

    Ghali Avatar Eileen Ghali Date: 9/7/2013 12:27:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks, my sweet! I always love your visits....
  1. Date: 9/6/2013 8:15:00 PM

    Sounds like passion wins hands down baby girl, yep! xxx

    Ghali Avatar Eileen Ghali Date: 9/7/2013 12:29:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    OOOOOPPPPPPSSSSSSS...Sorry, Rose. GRRRRR.....That post was for Richard. YOU are my angel... HA HA!
    Ghali Avatar Eileen Ghali Date: 9/7/2013 12:27:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    I'm VERY low on patience. I had a pin I'd wear..."Lord give me patience...RIGHT NOW!" Yea...That's me...Yea...more of an open book type...That's me. About contests...whatever! Que Sera sera! What will be, will be. thanks for your post, Richard.
    Ghali Avatar Eileen Ghali Date: 9/7/2013 12:25:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Yea...with that trick, it had better! ;) HUGS, my angel!
  1. Date: 9/6/2013 5:52:00 PM

    Subtlety and patience not being your middle names my little Desert Orchid,make this contest perfect for you lol. Your poem is excellent and right on the button. Take care, Richard

    Ghali Avatar Eileen Ghali Date: 9/7/2013 12:28:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    I'm VERY low on patience. I had a pin I'd wear..."Lord give me patience...RIGHT NOW!" Yea...That's me...Yea...more of an open book type...That's me. About contests...whatever! Que Sera sera! What will be, will be. thanks for your post, Richard.
  1. Date: 9/6/2013 5:39:00 PM

    Ha ha, it sounds like he should be happy as well.

    Ghali Avatar Eileen Ghali Date: 9/7/2013 12:47:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Hmmmmmmmm.....If I'm writing the scenario, or sure....YES! :)
    Ghali Avatar Eileen Ghali Date: 9/7/2013 12:47:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Drats...THAT WAS FOR SURE!
  1. Date: 9/6/2013 5:31:00 PM

    I must admonish you my dear Eileen! I KNOW the contest is entitled "Passion Over Patience" but I'm an old guy, not sure how strong my old ticker is! Maybe if you write something like this again, you need to warn us, NOT FOR YOUNGSTERS OR HORNY OLD GEEZERS! Guess you're sleeping away at the moment but had to get this off my chest! LOL Hugs, sweet lady... Kenny xoxoxox

    Breidenthal Avatar Laura Breidenthal Date: 9/8/2013 12:03:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    HAHAHAHAH :D
    Ellison Avatar Jack Ellison Date: 9/7/2013 1:40:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Yee haw! "I like older men" But there's older and then there's ancient... I fit into the second category I'm afraid! LOL But you've made my heart go all a-flutter! Big huggeroonies my dear sweet Miss Boop! xoxox
    Ghali Avatar Eileen Ghali Date: 9/7/2013 12:50:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Kenny...You are a sweetie pie and I won't have you disparage yourself....YOU ARE NOT AN OLD GEEZER...the other bit...Now I wouldn't know! ;) I'm sure your ticker is JUST FINE, my dear! By the way...EVERYONE who knows me knows I like older men! :) They just have that wonderful quality of being absolutely AMAZING! HUGS!
  1. Date: 9/6/2013 3:45:00 PM

    A VERY ENJOYABLE AND BEAUTIFUL PIECE OF WRITING

    Ghali Avatar Eileen Ghali Date: 9/7/2013 12:54:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Why thank you, Liam...Glad to have this visit from you. Will check you out soon! :)
  1. Date: 9/6/2013 1:09:00 PM

    ohhh, subtle seducution makes me drool, eileen... enticing, intense work that really pulls me in... :) huggs

    Ghali Avatar Eileen Ghali Date: 9/7/2013 12:56:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Sorry, Nette...I'm not well today, so my brain is sabotaging all my posts! Yes...glad you could connect with this...At one point I thought it was just turning out to be silly and funny instead of seductive....Yea...to move things along...Hit 'em with your best shot! ;) Thanks for the visit and continued support.
    Ghali Avatar Eileen Ghali Date: 9/7/2013 12:53:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    I know...once that DAMN comes around...I KNOW I'm on the money! :) Thanks, Becca. I must say...patience isn't a virtue I posses...So, this contest was just up my alley...in this area, no less! ;) Thanks or the visit!
  1. Date: 9/6/2013 1:05:00 PM

    "But if it takes too long I’ll go in for the kill" haha I love that line, that really brings it home for the win! :)

    Ghali Avatar Eileen Ghali Date: 9/7/2013 12:55:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    I know...once that DAMN comes around...I KNOW I'm on the money! :) Thanks, Becca. I must say...patience isn't a virtue I posses...So, this contest was just up my alley...in this area, no less! ;) Thanks or the visit!
    L. Avatar Rebecca L. Date: 9/6/2013 1:07:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    And you know it was good... you got a "holy damn" from Drake!! :)
  1. Date: 9/6/2013 9:40:00 AM

    Holy damn, this was.....deep. Great declaration! Your "subtleties" know no bounds. ;-)

    Ghali Avatar Eileen Ghali Date: 9/6/2013 10:11:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    OH DRAKE!!! You are so so sweet! ;) I tried to be subtle...but...there was no other way to get the guy to MAKE A MOVE!!! HA HA! :) Thanks!