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Haiku 82

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Haiku 82

	
	
	
		
	
	
	Haiku 82
	
	barefoot summer boys
	hot asphalt streets bubbling tar
	blister careless feet
	
	
	
	
	
	

	
	
	
	
	
	

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  1. Date: 9/16/2013 3:15:00 PM

    I remember those days, and now wear shoes. Great write.

    Jordan Avatar Jack Jordan Date: 9/16/2013 4:53:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Me too, on both counts... Jack
  1. Date: 9/12/2013 12:33:00 AM

    Yikes. you hit the nail on the head.

    Jordan Avatar Jack Jordan Date: 9/12/2013 7:55:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    My feet remember it well, and not fondly... Jack
  1. Date: 9/7/2013 2:04:00 PM

    summer blisters!.. nothing short of superb, jack.. you write 'ku with such ease..:) huggs

    Jordan Avatar Jack Jordan Date: 9/7/2013 2:53:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks you, Nette. That means a lost, coming from you... Jack
  1. Date: 9/6/2013 4:44:00 PM

    .... Sounded painfully this too .... well done, Jack! - Have a great weekend! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

    Jordan Avatar Jack Jordan Date: 9/6/2013 4:53:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    I really was painful. We all had to be very careful... Jack
  1. Date: 9/6/2013 4:08:00 PM

    Cute..I remember those days...typo careless? If for the contest..its a winner. BG

    Jordan Avatar Jack Jordan Date: 9/6/2013 4:36:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Yes, a typo... Thanks... Jack