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Sheol

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Sheol

Dark Knight-tress 

Underneath 
This gown I feel nothing
Silk less feelings
The odor of intimate apparel lessens 
Vanity fare from any sun
Warrior of beauty
Where have you gone?
A fortress of gloom
Not even death wants in
Black nail tips
Brownish plum lips

I close my eyes 
I see them all
The Shadows
Climbing over my soul
The darken deepens 
The stars dim my view
Irremovable makeup
Land becomes an enemy
I become
The Dark Knight-tress
Scolding my next victim

~S~

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  1. Date: 3/19/2014 4:28:00 PM

    this is a cool poem bout death

  1. Date: 3/2/2014 7:06:00 PM

    Congratulations on the well-deserved 1st place with this strong piece of Gothi(S)ka(t)!

  1. Date: 3/1/2014 11:25:00 PM

    Wow Skat. Dark Knight-ress indeed. Your words put me in mind of the depiction of hell (sheol) from the movie, "What Dreams May Come" Your poem was expertly written, and I enjoyed it. Grats! Christopher Thor Britt

  1. Date: 2/28/2014 10:22:00 PM

    This is an awesome poem. CAn't remember when it was first posted but I love it. congrats!

  1. Date: 2/28/2014 8:58:00 PM

    Good morning my dearest Skat! Biggest hugs! So glad to read this stunning write of yours once again and saw it won. My big hearty congratulations on your top win! Kudos and more sweet hugs to u! Thank u so much again for sharing. I want also to take this opportunity to thank you for liking my dedicated poems. More blessings to u and your family! Have a great wkend to all! Sending love & smiles this wkend! lovem4ever, Leonora

  1. Date: 2/28/2014 7:38:00 PM

    I do remember this dark poem, because it is on my favorites list! ;) Love this one, SKAT! Congratulations on your win, as well!

  1. Date: 2/28/2014 6:57:00 PM

    Very dramatic. Congratulations on a well deserved win. Cheers.

  1. Date: 2/28/2014 12:12:00 PM

    - Congratulations on your winning poem in Giorgio A.V. contest !!! - A well written poem, Skat. - Have a lovely weekend. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

  1. Date: 2/28/2014 11:35:00 AM

    tahnk you G. SKAT

  1. Date: 2/28/2014 9:00:00 AM

    Very impressive poem. Congrats on the win, skat

  1. Date: 2/28/2014 8:53:00 AM

    Congrats Skat on the win . A brilliant one indeed.

  1. Date: 2/20/2014 9:13:00 AM

    Creepy intrigues me, and you know I have a thing for shadows! Great poem :)

  1. Date: 2/15/2014 7:50:00 AM

    Scary poetry, and dark inter sanctum. You linked the words together with frightful meaning and steadfast resolve. You betcha.

  1. Date: 1/27/2014 10:36:00 AM

    Rephaim, I, ever despised by myself...yet a real, dark pArt of my soul! IN-Friggin'-TENSE! "7"!!! Love this SKAT! Wonderfully Dark-yet so real! XOXOXO, Robert

  1. Date: 12/1/2013 2:12:00 AM

    Oh woah dis is dark awesome! Nightmarish thriller. Thumbs up! And warm thnx for d news.

  1. Date: 11/28/2013 7:10:00 PM

    Now you've done it--taken me to that dark, inside place and feel and left me there, thinking, pondering. I'll get out but still remember. Impressive.

  1. Date: 11/27/2013 7:01:00 AM

    Just began reading your poems. This one is awesome. Good luck.

  1. Date: 11/21/2013 12:58:00 AM

    Good work. A glimpse But very inside. By the way, thanks for your comment on mine. What do u think of the latest. Love your krow. Keep it up.

  1. Date: 11/20/2013 3:26:00 PM

    Dark, moody and eerie. Liked this a lot.

  1. Date: 11/9/2013 11:50:00 AM

    A dark eerie poem you have penned. love phyl

  1. Date: 10/31/2013 2:07:00 PM

    This is very good and i wish you luck if it goes on the contest. thanks for sharing... Lucilla

  1. Date: 10/24/2013 1:57:00 AM

    The dark night_tress scolding the victim...wow so tense I could feel it every bit. What a wonderful write my dearest friend skat. You have done it again,kudos! I appreciate your noble comments on my poems. Love and tender kisses. I.B.E

  1. Date: 10/23/2013 8:10:00 PM

    You're writing is very creative and I took a second read and received the same vibes as the first. Finally caught the rhythm and discovered a fantastic piece of writing.... Jake

  1. Date: 10/20/2013 9:27:00 AM

    This has the wayward focus of finely crafted moods--dark and introspective, yet not wandering or diffuse. I think I understand it but maybe never will. Mark

  1. Date: 10/14/2013 12:43:00 PM

    Dark but Beautiful ! Loved this.

  1. Date: 10/13/2013 8:34:00 PM

    Straight to the point. Good. Very good. T. S.

  1. Date: 10/12/2013 11:37:00 PM

    Very introspective; like a critical self-portrait? I like it. It makes me take a closer look at myself in the mirror, and I don't always like what i see. Good poetry makes the reader think, and question, and want to read again to see what they missed. Like a good movie you see something different every-time; thank you. And thank you for the kind words about "Love Is". I wrote that poem 10 yrs ago for my family; they won't read poetry unless it rhymes; but I am a very happy middle aged Christian, with a great life and wonderful family. I enjoy meeting and reading other poets, when I'm not working. I am a member of our local Poets Society. I look forward to reading and meeting all of the Poets at Poetry Soup. Your Poetically new friend Jesse.

  1. Date: 10/12/2013 6:27:00 PM

    Very eerie, no more cemetery walks in the dark for me after reading this lol. Take care, Richard

  1. Date: 10/11/2013 4:48:00 AM

    Nice and a warm poem.Well penned dearest Skat. Thanks a lot for ur sweet comments on my poems and I thank u for ur words of encouragements,am happy to see my works are making some people happy and joyous. I assure u guys I wil bring out my best! Love alwayz, Baron of ebullion

  1. Date: 10/6/2013 9:31:00 AM

    I love this!

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