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  1. Date: 9/14/2013 7:22:00 PM
    Thanks Frank, for the comment.. I'm now seeing this poem on the featured page... Goodnight... :-)

  1. Date: 9/14/2013 1:30:00 PM
    A mystic little memory you hold on too. After reading this I hope his memory never fades. Almost like a haunting. I know I've read and comment this poem in the past. Frank, the imagery rains and pours with sweet terror. I love the open scene:-) the old man, mending with time. A little place in the mind. NORTHERN NEVADA, I wonder is he's allowed to get away with the crime... A great piece & story... yours truly Irma-Linda

  1. Date: 9/9/2013 9:37:00 PM
    Wow! What a captivating story, Frankie! You are so gifted!!! Beautiful write...Soup Mail

  1. Date: 9/7/2013 12:26:00 PM
    your writing is like taking a fabulous journey right into a story book. So deeply immersed in this stirring tale. :)

  1. Date: 9/6/2013 7:12:00 AM
    A tragic sad end to a story of a love..though the angel shining from above brings hope..Sad and beautiful...beautiful and sad..and beautiful Frank

  1. Date: 9/5/2013 9:41:00 PM
    What I liked the most is the three characters pen pictured so well the rest is clear

  1. Date: 9/5/2013 5:05:00 PM
    nice to see you posting poems again after removing the others, frank! I'm sure I've commented on this one before, a master story teller you are :)