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In Sheol

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Below is the poem entitled In Sheol which was written by poet Ken Carroll. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

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In Sheol

Lover
Yes the love you evoke
The heart you wove
Spirit you broke

Shadow am I
Go to the Witch of Endor

In Sheol
my soul
yes my love
darkness unfolds

In Sheol
one weepeth dust
wind blows cold

Feeling is lost
struggle to breathe
seas are tossed

Was I dead my lover?
yes I believe so
the shroud my cover

You arose from death
shined love on me
I am resurrected 
was blind now I see...

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  1. Date: 9/9/2013 8:48:00 AM
    "Sheol" the common grave or the abyss not commonly used word, which drew me towards this very unique piece god read

    Carroll Avatar Ken Carroll
    Date: 9/9/2013 9:53:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Hi Madelin, Thank you for the visit and wonderful comment. Ken
  1. Date: 9/5/2013 5:01:00 PM
    Kudos, right back at you Ken. A deep rising thought, enjoyed. thanks ~SKAT~ PS..love the title ~

    Carroll Avatar Ken Carroll
    Date: 9/5/2013 5:04:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Hi Skat, Thanks for stopping by and leaving a beautiful comment. Ken
  1. Date: 9/5/2013 3:15:00 PM
    A lovey poem and read my dearest Ken, you've taken us deep into your heart.. I like how steady one can feast when it comes to love. it takes 2 ta tangle .... and by the looks of it..you cut the dance to short... i love how perfect this poem feels..... xox~ Linda

    Carroll Avatar Ken Carroll
    Date: 9/5/2013 3:22:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Hi Linda, Thank you for your thoughts on this one.I have never been on to leave he dance too early.. Besos, Ken
  1. Date: 9/5/2013 6:41:00 AM
    Enjoyed reading your creative work..Thanks for stopping by my page..Sara

    Carroll Avatar Ken Carroll
    Date: 9/5/2013 6:48:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Hi Sara, Thank you for your kind visit also. Ken
  1. Date: 9/5/2013 4:34:00 AM
    well done, somehow Ken, I feel this comes from true emotions. I honestly feel you gave up to quick and blinded your own way. perhaps you are scared and you feel you are not grabbing her attention enough. Believing she broke your spirit, can be a mutual feeling. I felt like this towards a girl who shined me out of the dark. I would feel broken every time she would not contact. it is I who drove her away. all I can do now is thank her. the title drew me in. great one. DX

    Carroll Avatar Ken Carroll
    Date: 9/5/2013 4:39:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Hi Dom, Thanks for the comment. Yes I admit this depicts a dark moment I was feeling one night..The concept of Sheol from Hebrew thought and Saul seeking the help of the Witch of Endor seem to fit..Thanks for the visit. Regards, Ken
  1. Date: 9/5/2013 2:51:00 AM
    - Beautifully described, Ken ... a little sad too. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

    Carroll Avatar Ken Carroll
    Date: 9/5/2013 4:33:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Hi Anne, Thank you for visiting and the beautiful comment. Ken
  1. Date: 9/5/2013 2:22:00 AM
    EXCELLENT PIECE KEN A PLEASURE TO READ MY FRIEND

    Carroll Avatar Ken Carroll
    Date: 9/5/2013 4:33:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Hey Liam buddy, Thank you my friend. Ken
  1. Date: 9/4/2013 11:45:00 PM
    Mystical....captivating...Glad to know her love pulled you out.....

    Carroll Avatar Ken Carroll
    Date: 9/5/2013 4:32:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Hi Eileen, Thank you for stopping by and leaving a wonderful comment. Ken
  1. Date: 9/4/2013 9:59:00 PM
    wow.... this is really different.. I'm imagining an mysterious place where death looms...very creative :)

    Carroll Avatar Ken Carroll
    Date: 9/4/2013 10:05:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Hi Karen, Thank you for stopping by and commenting..Good to read from you.. Ken
  1. Date: 9/4/2013 9:02:00 PM
    Very nice Ken, o filled with feeling, well done my friend....Peter

    Carroll Avatar Ken Carroll
    Date: 9/4/2013 9:06:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Hi Peter, Thanks for the visit and kind comment.. Ken
  1. Date: 9/4/2013 8:43:00 PM
    Loved the feeling in this ken....

    Carroll Avatar Ken Carroll
    Date: 9/4/2013 8:45:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    HI Donna, Thanks for visiting and the lovely comment.. Ken