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  1. Date: 10/4/2013 8:29:00 PM
    Most of us were taught to swim in that manner. Just a great little poem. Enjoyed much.

  1. Date: 9/17/2013 12:25:00 PM
    I was drawn in by the title of your poem. I enjoyed this poem. Fascinating read. Thank you for sharing.

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  1. Date: 9/4/2013 8:34:00 PM
    What sweet memories and poem..memories like these can't be replaced...

  1. Date: 9/4/2013 4:46:00 PM
    Wonderful memory there doc. I was that afraid of water, I was in my teens before I learned how to swim...Thanks for the read.....Peter

  1. Date: 9/4/2013 1:31:00 PM
    A memory worth keeping......a boy growing up, and learning something that will never be forgotten. Nicely done!

  1. Date: 9/4/2013 12:37:00 PM
    Memories are always great to have Dr. Ram. Enjoyed you sharing this beauty with us. ;)

  1. Date: 9/4/2013 9:34:00 AM
    Great memory that you have penned about your father..I know that he was dear to you..Thanks for stopping by..Sara

  1. Date: 9/4/2013 5:36:00 AM
    Your father sounds like quiet a character builder Dr. Ram, so glad you shared this jewel with us, the memories of our father's stay engraved in our hearts, they were our first teachers, sending you thoughts of peace and friendship, have a wonder day hugs xxx

  1. Date: 9/4/2013 4:31:00 AM
    yes childhood memories are the best , before the unfair Gannet test, how unfair the world becomes, to Tweedle de an Dum, till anger blinds the best, brain dead like me are some? so get it off your chest, and run Brer Rabbit run, cosmic 'eye 4 eye', you're blest? Don re: "A Fragment " Dr Ram

  1. Date: 9/4/2013 1:09:00 AM
    WOW!I love the themes of courage& family &how it so wonderfully flows! - Y.L Ndlovu