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  1. Date: 10/17/2013 12:07:00 PM

    I can believe every word... These things are too hard to make up. I've scared the bejabbers out of some trick or treaters in my time. I'd dress up in some grotesque costume and Jump at them from out of the shrubs as they came up the walk to the front door. I'm sure some of those little guys remember it. Ahh, what the heck... That's what Halloween is all about..... Jake

  1. Date: 10/2/2013 5:30:00 PM

    Sounds like a mystery only Scooby do and the team can solve lol. Hi Donna, great story, great Dad too haha. Take care, Richard

  1. Date: 9/24/2013 12:24:00 PM

    Love THIS!! So many unexplained thrills when we were young!!! Thanks for the memories.

  1. Date: 9/20/2013 12:03:00 AM

    I'm lovin' all these halloween poems! This is AWESOME! Such a pleasure to stop by and read some of your work today. :)

  1. Date: 9/19/2013 12:39:00 PM

    donna!.. got more?.. miss ya..:) huggs

  1. Date: 9/18/2013 8:55:00 PM

    Amazing Donna, kind of creepy... but, true ghost stories give me the creepy crawling feelings... enjoyed.. good luck in the contest... Linda

  1. Date: 9/18/2013 6:54:00 PM

    Wow........I wonder if your dad was in on some practical joke that he never disclosed? !! How exciting!!

  1. Date: 9/18/2013 10:05:00 AM

    Oh cool...I could only imagine what that experience was like...Good luck in the contest. :)

  1. Date: 9/17/2013 9:24:00 PM

    I keep looking for more... miss you. Hope you're ok. big hugs

  1. Date: 9/15/2013 11:22:00 PM

    Excellent. Nice halloween poem. Enjoyed Tfs

  1. Date: 9/15/2013 4:43:00 PM

    Reflective and delightful piece Donna.

  1. Date: 9/15/2013 11:25:00 AM

    Amazing Donna--have you ever gone back--what an entertaining write!

  1. Date: 9/14/2013 10:25:00 PM

    This is an excellent halloween poem which so much delighted me to read this morning my dear friend Donna. I love it and so enjoyed. Thank you so much for sharing and your warm congratulatory comments on my poem. Good luck in the contest and best wishes always! love lots, Leonora

  1. Date: 9/14/2013 4:21:00 PM

    Your father sounds like a fun guy. Lovely story, Donna. Licia :-)

  1. Date: 9/14/2013 2:59:00 PM

    wow cool story! Thanks so much for stopping by my verses. Light & Love

  1. Date: 9/14/2013 2:14:00 PM

    superb write gl Shadow x smiles

  1. Date: 9/14/2013 1:18:00 PM

    hi , donns... looking forward to your new write... hello!..:) huggs

  1. Date: 9/11/2013 9:35:00 AM

    A DELIGHTFUL PIECE OF WRITTING

    Jones Avatar Donna Jones Date: 9/11/2013 10:35:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks Liam....:-)
  1. Date: 9/11/2013 8:43:00 AM

    could be even aliens Donna, so scary yet so well written, and holds the readers attention till the end....

    Jones Avatar Donna Jones Date: 9/11/2013 10:26:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks Harry....I can't say...I just know we saw it....:-) and many others too I guess...
  1. Date: 9/10/2013 9:19:00 PM

    Wow! I want to see that too. I'll check it out... Jack

    Jones Avatar Donna Jones Date: 9/11/2013 10:24:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks Jack....have fun!!!!
  1. Date: 9/10/2013 4:35:00 PM

    wow, Donna. I LOVE this one. What a cool story. What state are you in? I was in Alabama once and saw some ghostly lights over a cemetery

    Jones Avatar Donna Jones Date: 9/11/2013 9:49:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Hey Andrea..I live in Oklahoma...we were visiting an aunt at the time....somewhere in another part of the state...I was so young I don't remember.what town.Google says oklahoma-missouri border I think...thanks for stopping..glad you liked....:-)
  1. Date: 9/10/2013 2:02:00 PM

    still makes my hair rise, donns... sweet hello!..:) huggs

    Jones Avatar Donna Jones Date: 9/11/2013 10:23:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Hi Nette....thanks for stopping...have a grand day!!!
  1. Date: 9/10/2013 10:34:00 AM

    Donna, love the suspense and the spooky theme in your poem. You should enter this into Russell's contest. Nice one!!! Hugs and love Gail

    Jones Avatar Donna Jones Date: 9/11/2013 10:04:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks Gail....will do...
  1. Date: 9/10/2013 7:38:00 AM

    This will do very well! It is already a favorite in my book. I enjoyed reading it again.

    Jones Avatar Donna Jones Date: 9/11/2013 10:03:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks....have a great day
  1. Date: 9/10/2013 6:35:00 AM

    The ghost lights....we have the same thing here down highway 302. I loved reading this. I was like...hey....is she from DeValls Bluff?

    Jones Avatar Donna Jones Date: 9/11/2013 10:02:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Hey you....nope....Oklahoma...they took us somewhere to my aunts house. I think Google said somewhere near..the missouri boarder..maybe arkansas too..it said something about a tri-state area...may be the same thing....cool!!
  1. Date: 9/10/2013 6:04:00 AM

    SPOOKEY!!! Got goosebumps... big big hugs, Jack xoxox

    Jones Avatar Donna Jones Date: 9/11/2013 9:58:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Ahhh.....thanks Jack......:-)
  1. Date: 9/9/2013 6:54:00 PM

    Very good story Donna, makes it even more interesting that is it a real story and that it happened to you, I enjoyed this immensely love xxx

    Jones Avatar Donna Jones Date: 9/11/2013 9:57:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you Rose...:-)
  1. Date: 9/9/2013 12:31:00 PM

    Very funny poem my friend, enjoyed a lot. Loved always, bl

    Jones Avatar Donna Jones Date: 9/9/2013 6:12:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Hi bl...funny 45 years later I agree ..thanks....:-)
  1. Date: 9/9/2013 8:55:00 AM

    Wow!!! I got goosebumps when I read your footnote that says it's true! lol I want to see it! :) Good write, very engaging!

    Jones Avatar Donna Jones Date: 9/9/2013 6:11:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Hey Becca....Google it and take your kids!!!!!..enjoy!!!!!
  1. Date: 9/9/2013 12:16:00 AM

    YIKES! I do NOT like the paranormal or supernatural or whatever....You had me going, MD. Think my heart is racing and I WOULD HAVE PEED MY PANTS TOO! Good luck in contest...Love ya!

    Jones Avatar Donna Jones Date: 9/9/2013 6:10:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    I know right? What kind of crazy parents do this to their kids? We loved it!!!!! I wish my younger two brothers would have been born then...they would have really loved it!!!!!
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