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  1. Date: 10/17/2013 12:07:00 PM
    I can believe every word... These things are too hard to make up. I've scared the bejabbers out of some trick or treaters in my time. I'd dress up in some grotesque costume and Jump at them from out of the shrubs as they came up the walk to the front door. I'm sure some of those little guys remember it. Ahh, what the heck... That's what Halloween is all about..... Jake

  1. Date: 10/2/2013 5:30:00 PM
    Sounds like a mystery only Scooby do and the team can solve lol. Hi Donna, great story, great Dad too haha. Take care, Richard

  1. Date: 9/20/2013 12:03:00 AM
    I'm lovin' all these halloween poems! This is AWESOME! Such a pleasure to stop by and read some of your work today. :)

  1. Date: 9/19/2013 12:39:00 PM
    donna!.. got more?.. miss ya..:) huggs

  1. Date: 9/18/2013 8:55:00 PM
    Amazing Donna, kind of creepy... but, true ghost stories give me the creepy crawling feelings... enjoyed.. good luck in the contest... Linda

  1. Date: 9/18/2013 6:54:00 PM
    Wow........I wonder if your dad was in on some practical joke that he never disclosed? !! How exciting!!

  1. Date: 9/18/2013 10:05:00 AM
    Oh cool...I could only imagine what that experience was like...Good luck in the contest. :)

  1. Date: 9/15/2013 11:22:00 PM
    Excellent. Nice halloween poem. Enjoyed Tfs

  1. Date: 9/15/2013 4:43:00 PM
    Reflective and delightful piece Donna.

  1. Date: 9/15/2013 11:25:00 AM
    Amazing Donna--have you ever gone back--what an entertaining write!

  1. Date: 9/14/2013 10:25:00 PM
    This is an excellent halloween poem which so much delighted me to read this morning my dear friend Donna. I love it and so enjoyed. Thank you so much for sharing and your warm congratulatory comments on my poem. Good luck in the contest and best wishes always! love lots, Leonora

  1. Date: 9/14/2013 4:21:00 PM
    Your father sounds like a fun guy. Lovely story, Donna. Licia :-)

  1. Date: 9/14/2013 2:59:00 PM
    wow cool story! Thanks so much for stopping by my verses. Light & Love

  1. Date: 9/14/2013 2:14:00 PM
    superb write gl Shadow x smiles

  1. Date: 9/14/2013 1:18:00 PM
    hi , donns... looking forward to your new write... hello!..:) huggs

  1. Date: 9/11/2013 9:35:00 AM

    Jones Avatar Donna Jones
    Date: 9/11/2013 10:35:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks Liam....:-)
  1. Date: 9/11/2013 8:43:00 AM
    could be even aliens Donna, so scary yet so well written, and holds the readers attention till the end....

    Jones Avatar Donna Jones
    Date: 9/11/2013 10:26:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks Harry....I can't say...I just know we saw it....:-) and many others too I guess...
  1. Date: 9/10/2013 9:19:00 PM
    Wow! I want to see that too. I'll check it out... Jack

    Jones Avatar Donna Jones
    Date: 9/11/2013 10:24:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks Jack....have fun!!!!
  1. Date: 9/10/2013 4:35:00 PM
    wow, Donna. I LOVE this one. What a cool story. What state are you in? I was in Alabama once and saw some ghostly lights over a cemetery

    Jones Avatar Donna Jones
    Date: 9/11/2013 9:49:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Hey Andrea..I live in Oklahoma...we were visiting an aunt at the time....somewhere in another part of the state...I was so young I don't remember.what town.Google says oklahoma-missouri border I think...thanks for stopping..glad you liked....:-)
  1. Date: 9/10/2013 2:02:00 PM
    still makes my hair rise, donns... sweet hello!..:) huggs

    Jones Avatar Donna Jones
    Date: 9/11/2013 10:23:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Hi Nette....thanks for stopping...have a grand day!!!