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Her Return

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Her Return

Time passes along,
Seen by his heart so heavy,
Angst at her return


First ever try at a Haiku.

Written in Afghanistan -3 SEP 2013

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  1. Date: 10/29/2013 9:13:00 AM
    Good day Marquis, nice of you to stop by and say hi... :-) :-)... glad the heavy feeling was gone once she returned... enjoyed.. the haiku... LINDA

  1. Date: 10/20/2013 1:10:00 AM
    beautiful , I feel a strong write in less words ! Haiku ! stay safe for us Soldier :)

    MC Mills-Cooper Avatar Marquis MC Mills-Cooper
    Date: 10/21/2013 11:21:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Well thank you Shanity -LOL!!! I need to catch up with you...Writing Machine! MC
  1. Date: 10/15/2013 5:36:00 PM
    Hoorah, it's as you guys say Awesome. xxx Fab first Haiku. xx

    MC Mills-Cooper Avatar Marquis MC Mills-Cooper
    Date: 10/21/2013 11:20:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Ms Jenny! You are -as we say, AWESOME!!! MC
  1. Date: 9/24/2013 4:55:00 PM
    Your haiku is very good Marquis...Love ...SKAT

    MC Mills-Cooper Avatar Marquis MC Mills-Cooper
    Date: 10/21/2013 11:18:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    SKAT! Thank you, sorry this is so late though. I've fallen behind here all over!
  1. Date: 9/24/2013 2:24:00 PM
    glad to see one of the troopers on the soup. sorry i haven't shared the respect i should have before. sometimes Afganistan doesn't ring out as loud as it does other days. you got the sylables right. but to be an expert it's more than sylables. it's the burst of thought in the readers mind.

    MC Mills-Cooper Avatar Marquis MC Mills-Cooper
    Date: 10/21/2013 11:17:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    No problem John, thanks for the comment and the advice, yeah these aren't nearly as easy to write as some may think...! MC
  1. Date: 9/21/2013 12:53:00 AM
    I think it is very nice, and I thank you for your remarks on my Good Grief poem. And YES< I WANTED you to laugh at it!!!

    MC Mills-Cooper Avatar Marquis MC Mills-Cooper
    Date: 10/21/2013 11:16:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    I still remember "Good Grief" very funny! Thanks and so sorry for my late reply here. MC
  1. Date: 9/20/2013 10:09:00 AM
    Marquis, very expressive and emotive work..I believe it was written from a heart that has much emotion..Thanks for the visits to my page.."Embrace" was written during my alone time with nature and God out on the porch in the early morn..I am glad that you enjoyed reading it..Sara

    MC Mills-Cooper Avatar Marquis MC Mills-Cooper
    Date: 10/21/2013 11:14:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    So sorry my reply is so late, things have become a bit unsettled...thank you ever so much for your kind words here Sara!!! MC
  1. Date: 9/8/2013 7:56:00 PM
    Your way braver than me:) nice job, MC

    MC Mills-Cooper Avatar Marquis MC Mills-Cooper
    Date: 9/9/2013 7:54:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Braver than you....? C'mon girl get out there and give it a shot...you could write a great one!!! LOL Thanks by the way, MC
  1. Date: 9/7/2013 6:47:00 AM
    First try but you did it very well my dear friend MC. Two thumbs up! I love it and so enjoyed. Thank you so much for sharing and your precious time reading my poems. I'm so humbled but I'm glad that you like them. Thank you so much and have a wonderful weekend to you and your love ones. love lots and big hugs, Leonora

    MC Mills-Cooper Avatar Marquis MC Mills-Cooper
    Date: 9/7/2013 10:57:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks, I did give it the good ol' college try! And again no problem, I love your work!!! MC
  1. Date: 9/3/2013 11:38:00 AM
    Fantastic 1st attempt! Spot on, sir! A good reminder that, at times, time does not always heal all.

    MC Mills-Cooper Avatar Marquis MC Mills-Cooper
    Date: 9/5/2013 10:14:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    My Man Drake, thanks Brother I appreciate the stop by!!! MC