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HOLD IT TIGHT

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HOLD IT TIGHT

Translucent, cool, refreshing
Through finger-tips caressing,
The challenge is arresting
I just cannot hold it tight.

The water trickles downward
Soon both my feet surrounded,
My finger-tips curl ‘round it
But I still can’t hold it tight.

If only it had body
For me to hold and study,
Then maybe I won’t worry
That I cannot hold it tight.

Now comes a revelation
A grasping of creation,
A pang of inspiration
I’ll just freeze it into ice.

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  1. Date: 9/3/2013 3:48:00 AM
    nicely written. Welcome to the Soup. Rick