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  1. Date: 12/17/2013 10:05:00 PM

    Yup! That is right! Crickets are very mysterious creatures. Did you hear about a composer that recorded the chirping of crickets once, and he slowed down the recording to discover that the crickets sounded like a human choir in perfect harmony? Always, Laura

  1. Date: 9/14/2013 12:52:00 AM

    haha, after enjoying this little poem, I looked down and saw Jack calling you a sweet lady!

  1. Date: 9/8/2013 3:39:00 PM

    What a beautiful avatar Scribe.I love your senryu..I can hear the rattling revealers in my ear..awesome.

    ML Avatar Scribe ML Date: 9/9/2013 7:00:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Lol..just kidding! Thanks for the visit and kind words!
    ML Avatar Scribe ML Date: 9/9/2013 6:59:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks Charmaine! The avatar is my middle daughter who's 21, she's not as cute as I am!
  1. Date: 9/7/2013 10:44:00 PM

    Wow on crickets! Wel dis is such a cool super poem in brief, a haiku. Pls do review my latest poem tnku.

  1. Date: 9/7/2013 1:48:00 PM

    Okay you need a new poem... the chirp is getting loud... shhhhhhhh! xox..PD

  1. Date: 9/6/2013 8:07:00 AM

    Cute one, Marlon. :) Soupmail :) hugs, Catie

    ML Avatar Scribe ML Date: 9/7/2013 6:36:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks Catie!
    Lindsey Avatar Catie Lindsey Date: 9/6/2013 9:46:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    lol two soupmails :)
  1. Date: 9/5/2013 7:00:00 AM

    Hello sweet lady! Well done... glad I dropped by! Warm wishes, Jack xox

    ML Avatar Scribe ML Date: 9/7/2013 6:36:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Lol
    Lindsey Avatar Catie Lindsey Date: 9/6/2013 9:47:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Hey! Sweet Lady! LOL ROFLMAO ha ha :) love ya, catie :)
    ML Avatar Scribe ML Date: 9/5/2013 8:36:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks Jack, but it's a pic of my middle daughter... Lol
  1. Date: 9/5/2013 3:24:00 AM

    - Beautifully described ...sing their love song. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

    ML Avatar Scribe ML Date: 9/5/2013 8:35:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks Anne Lise!
  1. Date: 9/5/2013 12:00:00 AM

    Hey fam...I had written several Senryu's with this topic..no need in posting it now. Your version is perfect. Your fan...and look whose talking about harassment. ..lol

    ML Avatar Scribe ML Date: 9/5/2013 8:33:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks Ink...you have to post, I want to see them!
  1. Date: 9/4/2013 11:55:00 AM

    Hey Marlon, I actually love that song, I have it on my phone as well. Awesome that you made that connection to my poem. Thanks a mill ;)

    Neels Avatar Wilma Neels Date: 9/4/2013 12:29:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    I couldnt agree with you more it really is nice. Thanks to you for always looking in on my side ;)
    ML Avatar Scribe ML Date: 9/4/2013 12:20:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you, for the kind words, the visit, and the wisdom you share with us!
  1. Date: 9/4/2013 7:23:00 AM

    Enjoyed this one from you Marlon :) not so happy with bugs though :D

  1. Date: 9/3/2013 1:35:00 PM

    a different tune from you, marlon... love how this was composed in a buzz-like way!... :) huggs

    ML Avatar Scribe ML Date: 9/3/2013 11:40:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks Nette...just trying different approaches!
  1. Date: 9/2/2013 5:22:00 PM

    OO! I like the sound of this.. on second thought, crickets can be annoying when sharing all them secrets. Anyways, I have a very bad Cricket poem" Scribe, your senryu reminds me of the crickets around here, they chirp when far, then hush when near as if they are sharing secrets... It's all about the Shhhh! to them... enjoyed.. Linda

    ML Avatar Scribe ML Date: 9/2/2013 5:40:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks Linda...you know real friends are a very few...crickets hush, knowing they could become prey!