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Sincerly, An Unpublished Night

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Sincerly, An Unpublished Night

Memoirs of a timeless thought resurfaced
today, 
Left entangled on this previous page were 
shadows, 
Submerged in free will;
Preserved eternally, were those breaths stolen
away,
retrieved by the flow of unity. 

As I swam through these floodgates, 
I advanced apprehensively, in silent 
rapture; 
During this tranquil act, the curse of Mars 
limited my approach, 
I was left, resembling ice that had lost 
its composure; 
And yet this flawed man became accepted, 
As an invited struggle by Venus; 
I grew from this contrast, and became the
compliment.

Within this nocturnal frame, existed a premature 
touch of heaven, 
A door to the eternal sun, 
if in fact, I’m ascended higher from 
this entrance, 
Such a cause, would trail from you. 

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  1. Date: 2/3/2014 1:31:00 PM

    I love the almost elusive wording within this:)

    Clemons Avatar Jiril Clemons Date: 2/3/2014 4:52:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks Amanda. Appreciate the love.
  1. Date: 1/9/2014 6:42:00 AM

    Wow!! How beautiful you express how you dared to go straight through hard times and face it and how beautifully you grew!

    Clemons Avatar Jiril Clemons Date: 1/9/2014 12:16:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks Jody. Appreciate the love.
  1. Date: 12/24/2013 5:02:00 PM

    Jeril you perform poetic surgery within the nocturnal frame leaving love unpublished but forever captivating! Your words are a cut above!! Merry Christmas, chuck

    Clemons Avatar Jiril Clemons Date: 12/24/2013 5:48:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks Chuck. Appreciate the love.
  1. Date: 11/19/2013 7:47:00 PM

    A door to the eternal sun, you are amazing, definitely like your writing style, xxx

    Clemons Avatar Jiril Clemons Date: 11/19/2013 8:27:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks Mystic Rose.
  1. Date: 11/14/2013 4:18:00 PM

    I can relate to your words here. I am still stuck in-between the darkness and the light. Still trying to find my way out. You have an amazing talent, Jiril! Really great descriptive poetry!

    Clemons Avatar Jiril Clemons Date: 11/14/2013 4:29:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Kool!! i like your interpretation. My direction with which I was going was to express a private, intimate, and special moment with someone you care about. But I like your interpretation too. Thank you for the comments.
  1. Date: 11/12/2013 11:21:00 PM

    You are so one of a kind. Amazing diction, flow and word selection. You have it all. :)

    Clemons Avatar Jiril Clemons Date: 11/12/2013 11:34:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you Karen. Appreciate the love again. It's always a good feeling to have people who enjoy your poetry.
  1. Date: 10/4/2013 5:10:00 PM

    Thanks for letting me fly with your words,I love ti,Ivy

    Clemons Avatar Jiril Clemons Date: 10/4/2013 6:13:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you. Ivy. Appreciate the love.
  1. Date: 9/19/2013 11:36:00 AM

    Yes I agree with the rest here, wonderful poem, great word selection -nice going! MC

    Clemons Avatar Jiril Clemons Date: 9/19/2013 12:25:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks MC. Appreciate the love.
  1. Date: 9/19/2013 5:21:00 AM

    Wonderful poem. I liked it.

    Clemons Avatar Jiril Clemons Date: 9/19/2013 6:59:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks Susan. I appreciate it.
  1. Date: 9/18/2013 10:47:00 PM

    What a great poem you have here, it kept me intrested throughout the whole write! I love this poem great write! Very enjoyable! :)

    Clemons Avatar Jiril Clemons Date: 9/19/2013 6:58:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you, Christopher. Appreciate the love.
  1. Date: 9/18/2013 2:49:00 AM

    Enjoyed reading your free-verse this evening. I like your style:) Keep up the excellent work. Always, Laura

    Clemons Avatar Jiril Clemons Date: 9/18/2013 12:02:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks Laura. Appreciate the love.
  1. Date: 9/7/2013 1:14:00 PM

    A deep write indeed...love the flow and intensity of your choice words.

    Clemons Avatar Jiril Clemons Date: 9/7/2013 1:45:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks Pace. Appreciate the love.
  1. Date: 9/4/2013 10:41:00 AM

    To have someone so richly bless you is indeed a blessing to be shared... Great writing..... Thanks for sharing...... Jake

    Clemons Avatar Jiril Clemons Date: 9/4/2013 10:48:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks John. Appreciate the love.
  1. Date: 9/4/2013 8:58:00 AM

    Wow...I'm lost for words...such rich imagery, layered with meaning...beautiful, absolutely beautiful. Thanks for the feedback, much appreciated:) -Y.L Ndlovu

    Clemons Avatar Jiril Clemons Date: 9/4/2013 9:20:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks Yvette. Appreciate the love.
  1. Date: 9/2/2013 3:01:00 PM

    Wow a very conscious write,,,I enjoyed this unusual write today, jiril,,,thanks for sharing happy holiday Cherie x

    Clemons Avatar Jiril Clemons Date: 9/2/2013 3:19:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks Cherie. Appreciate the love