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Vampire

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Vampire

In darkness prey, 
hunts a vampire 
Empty within 
the soul 
Sucking life's feelings, 

drained beautiful thoughts 
Savouring frozen emotions, 
falling on top 
Biting deep 
into flesh 

Draining hurt tastes 
To savour 
each drop 
Lusting eyes, 
without soul 
pleasure hurts 

Love tastes beautiful 
Sipping slowly, 
without emotion 
Until the last drop 
Smiling taste ache 

Broken heart 
Died love 
On the last drop, 
cold without life 
In you 

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  1. Date: 9/3/2013 4:03:00 PM
    I love this dark poem, Liam! I have to admit that somewhere deep in my heart, I have a soft spot for the gothic poems such as this. Amazing job on this one!....I have a new poem that you might want to check out, it also has a vampire theme. It is titled, "My Despair".

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    Date: 9/7/2013 5:10:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    OH I BETTER CHECK IT OUT OH BUT I HAVE ONE THAT WILL TAKE OUT THANK YOU