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The country gathering

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The country gathering

The country gathering

Sometimes the folk all got together
In the little country house
Now there was Tom the tiny tiger
Well, he could be a louse
But could he play that old guitar
Man! he made it speak
And when the folk did hear him play
He made their legs go weak.

There was Winifred the otter
How she did those drums
Her rhythm it could suck one in
If you were feeling glum
You’re legs would start to dancing
As you’d rise up to the sky
And all those troubles that you had
They’d fade away and die.

Now Mugly Minie, could she sing!!
She was the porcupine
She’d stand there with a glass of wine
And she’d just blow your mind
As Billie basset, the friendly bear
Would play that bass so cool
Now he was quiet, and very shy
But lord, he had it all.

People came from miles around
To hear those  fellows play
They’d dance and sing Chicago blues
Their hearts alive and gay
They’re going to be a big time band
One day, they all know this
But all they really want to do
Is play, that’s how it is.

24 July 2013 @ 1150hrs.

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  1. Date: 9/3/2013 2:23:00 PM
    This put a smile on my face, Peter! Very nice, whimsical poem that you have written here. Very well done!....Thank you for your kind comments on my poem "The Shy Rose". I am so glad that you enjoy my poetry!

    Duggan Avatar Peter Duggan
    Date: 9/3/2013 3:41:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Kelly, sometimes I wish that I could write more like you. I tend to be a lyricist not a poet, I appreciate all your comments...Peter
  1. Date: 9/2/2013 4:17:00 PM
    Peter this is outstanding I can't praise it enough def a fav and a 7 Shadow x smile

    Duggan Avatar Peter Duggan
    Date: 9/2/2013 8:08:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you shadow, you make my day happy when you praise my simple verse. Coming from a writer with your wonderful talent it is high praise indeed....Peter
  1. Date: 9/2/2013 5:39:00 AM
    Peter I to like the flow of this piece which I thought was conversational. Love the fantasy element of it all.

    Duggan Avatar Peter Duggan
    Date: 9/2/2013 3:20:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks a heap Mustapha, I appreciate your input....Peter
  1. Date: 9/2/2013 1:37:00 AM
    flows pretty well mate ...amusing story line ...keep em coming mate....

    Duggan Avatar Peter Duggan
    Date: 9/2/2013 3:18:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you so much Don, as always your comments are appreciated...Peter