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My Love

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My Love

I lost my love,
Or he lost me.
I don't know which is true.
I know we made mistakes
That neither can undo.
My friends all said it wouldn't work.
I guess that they were right.
But when I close my eyes to dream,
He comes to me each night.
His daytime love is not his love.
She's standing in for me.
But I hope that he is kind to her,
As kind as frost can be.


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  1. Date: 10/16/2013 4:04:00 AM
    ooo beautiful..sound slike he lost u..i love it love it love it

    Crespo Avatar Beverly Crespo
    Date: 10/17/2013 12:54:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Very, very perceptive.
  1. Date: 10/10/2013 1:05:00 AM
    Now this is COOL. (like that Frost line at the bottom how clever!!!) I think of all the poems of yours I have seen now, which really is not many, but THIS is my favorite.

    Crespo Avatar Beverly Crespo
    Date: 10/10/2013 2:50:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Good morning night owl! I love being awake when everyone else is asleep. And I fave that last line too. "What's mine is mine!" Thanks Andrea. Have a good night, morning, etc.!
  1. Date: 10/3/2013 10:18:00 PM
    Hello Beverly, i love the comment you left on my latest poem. The Letter... :-)...Linda

    Crespo Avatar Beverly Crespo
    Date: 10/4/2013 3:33:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    pd---Your poem made me remember that day as though it were yesterday(and it wasn't). I still remember that poor little old lady as she struggled up the steps, holding onto my arm. She was embarrassed to be old. I got it then, and I get it now. It was a kind poem. Thanks pd.
  1. Date: 9/16/2013 4:58:00 AM
    A love lost a love gained! I am certain a new heart is beating for you! Wonderfully written and true! Thank you for visiting!

  1. Date: 9/11/2013 9:17:00 PM
    very deep..Beverly... always..Linda

    Crespo Avatar Beverly Crespo
    Date: 9/16/2013 3:53:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Linda.
  1. Date: 9/1/2013 7:59:00 PM
    Nice love lost expressions

    Crespo Avatar Beverly Crespo
    Date: 9/1/2013 9:09:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you! So nice to hear from you.