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  1. Date: 1/23/2014 1:35:00 PM
    ha ha, you know what they say 3rd time's a charm. Yasmin, this is a nice and lovely way in situation a child's sleep... Very peaceful imagery... Linda

  1. Date: 11/27/2013 1:28:00 AM
    Yasmin, Thank you for spreading and sharing your kindness. You know me I’ will always enjoy stopping by with love and support, no matter if I do not Understand what I am reading at times. I am very grateful and thankful to all who have been supportive of me one way or another. Your heartfelt words are the main attraction of who you are… Thanks for your inspiring visit. ----- Happy Thanksgiving ~ LINDA

  1. Date: 10/6/2013 7:07:00 PM
    this is such a beautiful your images woven within, brilliant poem my friend :)

  1. Date: 9/25/2013 4:29:00 AM
    Hi Yasmin sorry not been around lately but this is a most beautiful write my friend, all the best Poetowen

  1. Date: 9/11/2013 12:59:00 AM
    hi thiis up to your usual wonderful standard yasmin love, and yes i am okay thanks and keep hoping to get back into the swing but life keeps knocking me back. take care love xx

  1. Date: 9/5/2013 3:04:00 PM
    This was so well done, Yasmin. I loved it! And, I love the nighttime. I gaze at the stars and the moon whenever I can...You might like my poem titled, "Mystic Moon"....Thank you so much for your kind comments. It really means so much to me!

  1. Date: 9/4/2013 4:21:00 PM
    A beautiful poem this is. Nothing like a starry night. Thanks for sharing.... Lucilla

  1. Date: 9/3/2013 12:32:00 PM
    Hi Yasmin, i wish I could pull off so many forms.. You do them all well. do me a favor... PLEASE! send me your pen.. ha ha.. I need to paint the perfect imagery... enjoyed...Linda

  1. Date: 9/2/2013 1:25:00 PM
    i am star-struck, mareyy... beautifully epxpressed by one who embodies selene... i think we we need 4 lines?.. just a thought!... i'm okay, just arrived from bali.. you in mumbai?..:) hugggs

  1. Date: 9/2/2013 9:30:00 AM
    Bedtime stories....lovely Yasmin.....your magic shines again....

  1. Date: 9/1/2013 4:08:00 PM
    This is truly brilliant my friend, a great attempt at a Shappic stanza, though I think your form in off a little though, check that out! I really enjoyed reading this poem this evening! What a glorious piece, Great Work!!

  1. Date: 9/1/2013 3:34:00 PM
    Reads like a winner to me..I still don't know the rhythm..Thanks for stopping by..Sara

  1. Date: 9/1/2013 1:44:00 PM
    sweetie, this is BEAUTIFUL. but something to tell you about the form in soupmail.

  1. Date: 9/1/2013 12:11:00 PM
    Hi Yasmin, A lovely write depicting nocturnal splendor.. Ken

  1. Date: 9/1/2013 10:44:00 AM
    - So beautiful Yasmin ..... tell me a bedtime story when I go to bed .... please.. :))) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)