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  1. Date: 9/6/2013 10:55:00 AM
    'Tis a joke, and a disgrace what our society focuses on, and considers worthy of our utmost attention......while our world teeters on the edge of insanity.

  1. Date: 9/5/2013 9:04:00 AM
    I don't care what it's awesome. You're so fluid in your writing, I never get bored reading it. It's got GRAIN!

  1. Date: 9/1/2013 10:49:00 AM
    WOW! SO much truth in this. Your writing always has underlying depth of meaning...One has to really trying to unfold all the aspects of it. Needless to say...the last part of the poem struck close to home...YES...impending war...My heart cannot believe it will come to pass...IT CAN NOT! :( What the world worries about??? The antics of Miley...while young people her age die and the world doesn't make a sound. Chris...I applaud you. A moving piece. Thanks for sharing...

    Manassian Avatar Eileen Manassian
    Date: 9/1/2013 10:50:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    BTW...I answered your posts on my poem, I Expected More...Thank you for sharing your thoughts.
  1. Date: 9/1/2013 1:36:00 AM
    Wow...this is something serious. I personally agree with what you've stated as far as the message and audience. I actually didn't see the show but heard about it. And all were negative responses. After reading this, I didn't know she was that dmn young...that's sickening. Giant teddy bear was enjoying the show. Excellent write.