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Echo

Many voices from the past,
Always echoing in my head,
How long can it last,
I thought you were dead.

You always tell me what to do,
So I don't make a mistake,
Somehow you always knew,
How many I could make.

Because once I hurt you,
And you'll never let me forget,
But what can I do,
You're not quite dead yet.

Why won't you leave me alone,
Will you never forgive me,
I wish I could atone,
Please, just let me be.

The hollow echo of your voice,
Will linger on forever,
You've given me no choice,
It'll never stop, ever.

The sound of you used to make me smile,
But now it tortures me,
I will always be in denial,
So an end I'll never see.





Written by: Kelly Deschler

Giorgio V.'s contest - "Impress Me 2" -  themes-gothic/spiritual

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  1. Date: 7/8/2014 9:42:00 AM
    Wow! Talk about the past catching up to you. I feel the deepness in these words Kelly. Amazing write.

    Deschler Avatar Kelly Deschler
    Date: 7/12/2014 11:21:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you for the great comments, Rohan. I appreciate it so much!
  1. Date: 5/22/2014 3:18:00 PM
    Hi Kelly, so many times the echo's of the past come back to haunt us. As always my Friend, your light shines through In this write. An excellent piece Kelly. You always manage to bring the reader Into your piece and It Is well written. This write Is hauntingly beautiful In Its pain. Your piece flows from begining to end. Let your heart sing Kelly, whether In sadness or Joy. The echo shall ever remain. Have a good day. Catch you later. Your Friend always....MIKE.

    Deschler Avatar Kelly Deschler
    Date: 5/23/2014 2:51:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Hi Mike, the past is always near, to remind us of our mistakes and our successes. And it can haunt us for the rest of our lives, sometimes in both good and bad ways.... Thank you so much for taking the time to read and comment on my poems. I do appreciate it, my friend! Have a good day!
  1. Date: 3/1/2014 7:41:00 AM
    Wow, this is an amazing expression of being haunted by the past. I absolutely love it! Great write!!

    Deschler Avatar Kelly Deschler
    Date: 3/3/2014 8:14:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you very much, Heather! I appreciate that you stopped by to read my poem. Glad you enjoyed it! :)
  1. Date: 2/5/2014 6:31:00 PM
    Congratulations Kelly... Good write... Verlena

    Deschler Avatar Kelly Deschler
    Date: 2/8/2014 4:01:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you for the kind comments, Verlena! I appreciate you stopping by.
  1. Date: 2/5/2014 12:11:00 PM
    Many congratulations Kelly xx

    Deschler Avatar Kelly Deschler
    Date: 2/7/2014 11:03:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you very much, Mandy! I appreciate you stopping by.
  1. Date: 2/5/2014 1:27:00 AM
    Look whose on the winners podium!!! And well deserved too. I like it. Ron

    Deschler Avatar Kelly Deschler
    Date: 2/7/2014 4:29:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you so much for the great comments, Ron! I am glad that you liked my poem! :)
  1. Date: 2/5/2014 12:01:00 AM
    IT impressed me too and congrats on the win, kelly

    Deschler Avatar Kelly Deschler
    Date: 2/7/2014 4:19:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you for the kind comments, Dr. Ram! I appreciate it very much.
  1. Date: 2/4/2014 6:51:00 PM
    Congratulations on your no. 1

    Deschler Avatar Kelly Deschler
    Date: 2/7/2014 3:51:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you very much, Joyce! I appreciate you stopping by. :)
  1. Date: 2/4/2014 5:01:00 PM
    Kelly: Congratulations on having performed with greatness in my contest "Impress me II", and participated with such an impressive poem. Giorgio V.

    Deschler Avatar Kelly Deschler
    Date: 2/5/2014 10:54:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you so much for honoring me in your contest, once again, Giorgio! I very much appreciate the recognition. :)
  1. Date: 1/10/2014 4:26:00 PM
    Kelly, .. I posted a new poem would you like to take a trip and read my poem..... You will find your name on my latest... hehehehHeheheh, WARNNING!!! It is a long poem... :) :) LINDA

    Deschler Avatar Kelly Deschler
    Date: 1/10/2014 4:45:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Sure, of course I will Linda! :) I will be right over to read your new poem!
  1. Date: 12/26/2013 10:49:00 PM
    Kelly Such a hauntingly sad and painful write. I could feel the sorrow and torture pouring out of you for the reader to see and experience. Nice job Thanks for the sweet comment on my Christmas Wishes write. Hugs

  1. Date: 10/11/2013 6:08:00 AM
    Fascinating material you've composed here Kelly. It is well written, I enjoyed perusing this today.

  1. Date: 9/11/2013 2:30:00 PM
    THE VOICES OF THE PAST BOUNCING INSIDE THE WALLS OF YOU BEAUTIFUL PIECE EXCELLENT

  1. Date: 9/3/2013 4:25:00 PM
    about your poem: I never had an echo follow me like this. I'd probably go mad or sad, twisting my mind to long for the voice... well done...Linda

  1. Date: 9/3/2013 4:23:00 PM
    I'm waiting on your new post called mystic moon. I will come back after dinner to read the poem.. always~ Linda

  1. Date: 8/31/2013 4:28:00 AM
    This was sad Kelly. It reminded of a poem I wrote a while aback called '' The Farewell. '' You are an excellent writer and I'm your new fan and friend.

  1. Date: 8/30/2013 6:03:00 PM
    I pray this is not the case Kelly, I hope one day your heart will heal and grow strong with faith hope and trust to lead the way love xxx