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  1. Date: 9/2/2013 12:41:00 PM

    NETTE!!!! I can see Gable saying these words! WOW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! You are amazing! Your writing is so....sooooooo...enthralling! I wish you every success. I was thinking of giving this a go...but....you are way out of my league...and I see you taking the gold. Hugs!

  1. Date: 9/1/2013 1:53:00 PM

    I love the second stanza of this one. You really captured the essence of what she was doing to him and why she deserved his disdain!! I went for the purely philosophical route in the contest! Hope I do well with it.

  1. Date: 9/1/2013 1:16:00 AM

    Very impressive heartfelt write this is my dear friend, Nette. Kudos again!Thank you so much for sharing! Good luck and best wishes always! Have a nice weekend! love lots and biggest hugs, Leonora

  1. Date: 8/31/2013 3:59:00 PM

    Wow Nette....this is an amazing write! Strong words and emotions. Love it! Hugs

  1. Date: 8/30/2013 6:46:00 PM

    Interesting rendition of the known film. Eloquent and precise deserves to win. :) G.

  1. Date: 8/30/2013 5:27:00 PM

    Expressive work..Two strong people totally misfitted sad book and movie wasn't it..Sara

  1. Date: 8/30/2013 5:04:00 PM

    You should certainly take a bow my friend. This was wonderful both in meaning and rhythm. Loved it and good luck in the contest.

  1. Date: 8/30/2013 4:43:00 PM

    Fabulous!! I have to start by saying that I surely love the rhyming scheme you used for this write my friend! And your work, oh it's so very good, such a spectacular poem Nette! You truly can write the best poetry, and on pretty much any subject matter too! I really enjoyed reading this delightful piece! What a powerful verse, Great Work!!

  1. Date: 8/30/2013 3:57:00 PM

    this is like a sip of strong expresso, pungeant and strong, you always make me proud of your poetry Nette in a good way love you xxx

  1. Date: 8/30/2013 3:20:00 PM

    (- Dishonest "game" in love .... - Find another "prince" )- A clever poem, as always, Nette ! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

  1. Date: 8/30/2013 3:10:00 PM

    a southern belle sense , nice , "gone with the Wind " good poem !