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Among The Stars

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Among The Stars

I see your sparkling eyes among the stars
Your voice calls out to me upon the breeze
Although it seems that it has been many years
I can remember like it was yesterday

Your voice calls out to me upon the breeze
A melody that somehow pricks my heart
I can remember it like it was yesterday
All those moments will not be lost in time

A melody that somehow pricks my heart
You were my joy I held you to my breast
All those moments will not be lost in time
Now you reside in the place where angels sing

You were a joy I held you to my breast
I watched you grow from a boy to a man
Now you reside in the place where angels sing
This world could not hold one as special as you

I watched you grow from a boy to a man
Although it seems it has been many years
This world could not hold one as special as you
I see your sparkling eyes among the stars



I have a friend who recently lost her son and I am
writing this poem from a female perspective.

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  1. Date: 9/3/2013 4:53:00 AM

    Oh my! You did very well with the woman's perspective. Such emotion with the joy unable to be completely submerged by the sadness.

    Lamoureux Avatar Richard Lamoureux Date: 9/3/2013 7:50:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks again Monterey.
  1. Date: 9/1/2013 9:05:00 AM

    U have done a very gud job by writing such an emotional poem. I hope ur friend finds peace and happiness again.

    Lamoureux Avatar Richard Lamoureux Date: 9/3/2013 7:49:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    She is doing better than expected, thanks Red.
  1. Date: 8/31/2013 3:05:00 PM

    excellent poem Richard showing your female side. pass my deepest regards to your friend I feel for her. (7) and fav Shadow x smile

    Lamoureux Avatar Richard Lamoureux Date: 8/31/2013 3:23:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks Shadow.
  1. Date: 8/31/2013 7:40:00 AM

    very touching, Richard, and a fine tribute to your friend and her son... Jack

    Lamoureux Avatar Richard Lamoureux Date: 8/31/2013 3:23:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks Jack
  1. Date: 8/31/2013 7:32:00 AM

    This is emotionally touching Richard, & a special tribute poem, to your friend....blessings always & thankyou for sharing..<3.Cherie

    Lamoureux Avatar Richard Lamoureux Date: 8/31/2013 3:24:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks for comment and blessing.
  1. Date: 8/30/2013 4:31:00 PM

    I thought this was moving Richard. I really love the personification of it. It stands out. Wonderful stuff!

  1. Date: 8/30/2013 8:13:00 AM

    When read my breast, I was taken a back then I knew it is from the woman perspective. What a lovely emotional and sentimental expressions,Richard

    Lamoureux Avatar Richard Lamoureux Date: 8/30/2013 8:15:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks Dr. Ram.
    Lamoureux Avatar Richard Lamoureux Date: 8/30/2013 8:13:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks Eillen.
  1. Date: 8/30/2013 8:10:00 AM

    Oh....Oh...how....I don't have words. I'm sure she will be touched by this tribute and it will bring balm to her aching heart...