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With a Mind Like a Steel Trap Too

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With a Mind Like a Steel Trap Too

Of COURSE I am not in the least insecure
My selfish-image? You bet, peerless and pure
Negative thoughts I avoid
Paranoia? Null and void
But you were talking and pointing I am sure…

For Susan’s contest

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  1. Date: 9/29/2013 10:53:00 AM

    Congratulations on your win! Good one...

  1. Date: 9/11/2013 7:39:00 PM

    enjoyed this one,,,,congrats on your win with this great poem :)

  1. Date: 9/10/2013 8:37:00 PM

    This is really good. Congrats for the win. hanks for sharing.... Lucilla

  1. Date: 9/10/2013 7:22:00 PM

    (ha ha ha he he ha) ... Timmy, Timmy, I can always count on you to put a smile on my face (that's why I always look for you when I finally get a chance to visit the site ... Your Friend, Moonie

  1. Date: 9/10/2013 3:52:00 PM

    haha self contradiction. Congrats for your win with this witty poem.

  1. Date: 9/10/2013 8:20:00 AM

    Congrats on your win friend tim :) cheers!! :)

  1. Date: 9/10/2013 7:38:00 AM

    Congrats. Tim-- well done on your deserved win here.

  1. Date: 9/10/2013 6:14:00 AM

    congrats on your win ...nicely done

  1. Date: 9/9/2013 8:28:00 PM

    Hi Tim,, congratulations on your win ~SKAT~ :-)

  1. Date: 9/9/2013 6:49:00 PM

    I love your wit Tim !! You would mix well with the funny-bones in my family!! Another win, but who is surprised? Not me!!

  1. Date: 9/9/2013 6:30:00 PM

    wow...Tim, yup... love the win...Linda

  1. Date: 9/9/2013 5:31:00 PM

    Good one Tim..perfect , paranoia, Im aquainted with..lol. BG

  1. Date: 9/9/2013 4:07:00 PM

    Tim, congrats on your 1st place win with this clever limerick! Love, Kim

  1. Date: 9/9/2013 4:00:00 PM

    Congratulations on your win. Rick

  1. Date: 9/9/2013 3:50:00 PM

    Congrats on your great win..I knew it would be..Sara

  1. Date: 9/9/2013 8:55:00 AM

    Love it! Congratulations?

  1. Date: 9/8/2013 7:21:00 AM

    hahahah. I love the wit in your limerick, Tim. Well done, my friend. Good luck in the contest. Licia :-)

  1. Date: 9/6/2013 4:33:00 AM

    Cute one, Tim..I got a chuckle..Thanks for stopping by my winning work with a side of me you had not seen..I was writing senuality about a piece of peppermint candy then I looked at the contest and remember it was suppose to be about the picture then I made a few changes to make it work..Ha!!Ha!! So that was about a peppermint stick..Sara

  1. Date: 9/5/2013 10:38:00 PM

    Your sense of humor is delightful Tim and I always enjoy reading your poems. This was great!

  1. Date: 9/2/2013 5:12:00 PM

    Of course its great...you wrote it!!!! Good luck Tim..it's awesome....

  1. Date: 8/31/2013 2:32:00 PM

    LOL.....this is GREAT! Hugs

  1. Date: 8/31/2013 12:04:00 PM

    An enjoyable read... Fun

  1. Date: 8/31/2013 9:26:00 AM

    Good luck in the Limerick contest.... soup mail...Linda

  1. Date: 8/30/2013 6:20:00 PM

    Thanks for the smiles Tim. Wishing you all the best in the contest ahead and a great weekend.

  1. Date: 8/30/2013 1:25:00 PM

    This is cute, Tim! Best wishes in the contest! Love, Kim

  1. Date: 8/30/2013 10:06:00 AM

    haha, that's a good one.

  1. Date: 8/30/2013 8:16:00 AM

    A nice journey into the inner past

  1. Date: 8/30/2013 7:21:00 AM

    hehe BG had me giggling with her comment but I agree with her Tim, its always a joy to pop in on your side of the world (*-*)

  1. Date: 8/30/2013 7:19:00 AM

    I was just talking about you! And saying what plessure I get out of your poetry. Now this one is a smiler...BG