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I Fall in Love

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I Fall in Love

I fall in love with broken daffodils, bent daisies,
with the touch of your cheek to mine.
Every time I see the sunset during work breaks
it makes me smile because today I have something to live for.

I fall in love with graying hair and age lines,
with low tides and the days that my feet reach the coast;
your hazelnut eyes and mud hands that make me look so silver.

I fall in love with broken souls, and bent perspectives,
with a caterpillars slow crawl and my mother’s sweet mercy.
You found a gold quarter today.
So ecstatic you were to see rarity.
I fall in love with chemistry, infrequency, 
the way you move so softly.
Every time the worm disappears,
I pray its going home.

I fall in love with angles, geometry,
white noise, and curves.
You drew today,
the world as you see it,
cupping the wrists of the continents with your palm indentations.
You said to me, “I can save them.”

I fall in love with bright lights at dusk, cold rooms, and warm blankets,
with wind storms, and how the thunder calls back the lightening.
Every time I see you,
see this,
I fall in love.

 

Love Poem - 29 by Chris D. Aechtner
Line used - I fall in love with broken daffodils, bent daisies,

I Fall in Love by Katie Pukash




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  1. Date: 9/21/2013 2:03:00 AM
    A nice way of expressing love Katie! congratulations for your win Bakari.

  1. Date: 9/18/2013 2:00:00 PM
    Katie, this poem is lovely . well deserved win............ luv ~SKAT~

  1. Date: 9/14/2013 6:25:00 PM
    An inspired take off on Chris's line! Congrad's on your win! Light & Love

  1. Date: 9/14/2013 7:08:00 AM
    you have a crafted a beautiful poem...congrats on your win :)

  1. Date: 9/13/2013 8:23:00 PM
    Love the poem Katie, --A beautiful poem and line... congratulations :-)...xox~ LINDA

  1. Date: 9/13/2013 2:21:00 PM
    You mesmerized me Katie, congratulations on your well deserved win, xxx

  1. Date: 9/13/2013 12:27:00 PM
    How could this be more beautiful ? Such a lovely twist on Chris's line........and another amazing poet, by the way. You honored him with this stunning piece!

  1. Date: 9/13/2013 10:30:00 AM
    Congratulations on your winning place Katie xx

  1. Date: 9/13/2013 8:44:00 AM
    Congrats on the first place win, Katie

  1. Date: 9/13/2013 8:15:00 AM
    Wow you did it again another first place in my contests. Congratulations! You are a talented poet.

  1. Date: 9/13/2013 7:06:00 AM
    a wonderful love poem Kudos Katie congrats on win Shadow x smile

  1. Date: 9/8/2013 8:13:00 PM
    great write...I enjoyed the read....best wishes

  1. Date: 8/31/2013 7:10:00 AM
    Thanks for entering this piece in my contest. This will be a gift for all who read it.

  1. Date: 8/31/2013 1:13:00 AM
    Hi Katie, Way to go! I love your writing style. The rhythm and beat in your words makes the poem a pleasure to read. The way you’ve transformed that line into a poem with a life of its own - wonderful. I’ll be sure to look out to more from you. Vicky.

  1. Date: 8/30/2013 8:22:00 AM
    Magnificent & powerful. The heart shined so brightly here in its declarations.

  1. Date: 8/30/2013 2:06:00 AM
    - A beautiful and touching poem, Katie. - Have a nice day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)