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Lonely Soul

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Lonely Soul

A well-worn path
of one lonely soul,
a solitary journey that
begins to take a toll.

A lonely soul that
was left an empty heart,
on one darkened day
when true love did depart.

A soul left lonesome
to live a painful life,
where a scar remains
like a cut from a knife.

Dark days turn to night
teardrops falling like rain,
no umbrella can shield
perennial tears of pain.

For a lonely lost soul
no comfort can be found,
there is no more love
when no light is around.

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  1. Date: 12/30/2013 11:22:00 PM

    Kelly Why are you trying to make me sad tonight. Bad girl. LOL Words of sorrow and pain that made my heart break. Loneliness can leave you broken in more ways than one. You will NEVER be lonely with me around. Thanks for the wonderful comment on my I'm A Horsie poem. Yes, I did put it in Chans contest. Hugs

    Deschler Avatar Kelly Deschler Date: 12/31/2013 7:57:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    I was not trying to make you sad, Robin...LOL...I do wish that I wrote more happy poems! Thank you for the great comments. And, thank you for being such a good friend! :)
  1. Date: 11/19/2013 8:55:00 PM

    Kelly....a touching heartfelt write. Well done! Big congrats on your win! Hugs

  1. Date: 11/18/2013 3:33:00 PM

    I can feel the hurt, the sadness and lonliness you express in this gem Kelly...Congratulations - Tim

  1. Date: 11/18/2013 2:35:00 PM

    Kelly---A beautiful, well-penned verse! I could feel the emptiness and loneliness in your heart with this emotional write! Many congrats on your well-deserved win! Julie :-)

  1. Date: 11/18/2013 11:31:00 AM

    You take the subject beyond the emotional limit. The 4th stanza is absolutely superb. A very fine poem as usual. Congrats on the win :)

  1. Date: 11/18/2013 10:10:00 AM

    The deep sadness, the somber tone of this poem, is so moving. So well done, Kelly! Congratulations!

  1. Date: 11/18/2013 2:09:00 AM

    Kelly: Effective metaphors and mature verse construct a winning result. Congrats on your win! G.

  1. Date: 11/17/2013 9:09:00 PM

    Great job. Congrats, Kelly!

  1. Date: 11/17/2013 8:17:00 PM

    Congratulations on the fine win, kelly

  1. Date: 11/17/2013 3:50:00 PM

    Hi Kelly, again on this one.... . Congratulation, Thank you for the fine win..... Sending hugs: -) Thank you for the support. hope you enjoy my newest poem.....always~ LINDA

  1. Date: 9/12/2013 2:56:00 PM

    Hi Kelly, nice work, deep and dark to read...I absolutely know the feeling here. This is something I really empathize with. However I kind of pulled myself from that lonely lost feeling, I kept myself from the light out of stubbornness. Kelly, I imagine this is not you... truly Thank you for sharing...Linda

  1. Date: 9/3/2013 7:40:00 AM

    that for me was amazingly beautiful

  1. Date: 9/1/2013 2:07:00 PM

    Hi Kelly, Thanks for referring me to this heartfelt write..Loneliness can certainly become an abyss. Regards, Ken..

  1. Date: 8/31/2013 4:44:00 AM

    When I read sad poems I really like to feel the emotions in it because I've written a few myself. This piece really touched me Kelly, I felt what you felt.

  1. Date: 8/30/2013 12:37:00 PM

    † "I Am The Light Of The World." * Shall One Sip This Wine Brought Forth In Waters Flowing A Spirit Free That They May Soar Atop Love's Wings And Beauty, Evermore ˜ Dare We Bow Unto An Age Her World Whom Offers Nothing But Dust In Ashes ? No! She Can Keep These Eyes Of Blind For Herself Tied By Lies Hopeless Bows To Part, Their Sorrows ˜ Thus, Lift Your Precious Beauty's Gaze Beyound The Gates A Heart She Waits, To Claim Your Joy And Here You Are *.*(* 'Welcome Home.' Love, John

  1. Date: 8/30/2013 12:55:00 AM

    hits me deep, this horror i keep, my painful sleep, like a rundown fear. forgotten nightmares peep, my wounded soul seep, blood and tears weep, my lonely soul stirred.

  1. Date: 8/29/2013 4:50:00 PM

    THE LIGHT OF A THOUSAND CANDLES SHINES ON LOVE BEAUTIFUL PIECE

  1. Date: 8/29/2013 4:48:00 PM

    This brilliantly wrote a sad poem with such depth into one's soul. Beautifully penned. Hugs and love, Gail

  1. Date: 8/29/2013 4:15:00 PM

    Wonderful and very sad poem. so true when love is not there, nor is the light....Thanks for sharing Kelly...Peter