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Gentle Summer Rain ll

Featuring:)  Giorgio Veneto

She writes about Fall's beauty in the rain 
the falling raindrops' dance ascribing thence 
bespoken verse that lightens her refrain 
before the time they met - her steps commence. 

She listens to the soft and rhythmic thrum, 
her love turned to escape and cloudy string 
where nimbus mistle fell, tears to become 
their kiss of Autumn was symbolic ring. 

The first light cotton mists with summer rays 
and skyward cheerful laughs adorn the land, 
their ceremonial dance diffuses grays, 
affectionate embrace, where dreams expand. 

Upon September's sky the raindrops gleam 
with half of hidden Sun to laugh and beam.

Enjoy the FRAGRANCE OF RAIN

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FRAGRANCE OF RAIN -contest-
8/29/13 
Sonnet 
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~A Poet Destroyer Collaboration~

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  1. Date: 4/12/2014 12:53:00 PM

    Great poem Linda, very graceful, inviting!

  1. Date: 1/22/2014 8:13:00 PM

    I love to walk in the summer rain especially at night along the shore, When i was young it seems like a life time ago, i'd sit on a log and walk the fish come out of the water just for a split second and than dive below it's true during rain storms you could watch them do this it was cool cheri

  1. Date: 12/30/2013 10:04:00 AM

    I read several of yours (just now) and, though I see the power in your words, I feel unworthy, due to lack of true poetic understanding, to comment. This one is simple and lovely.

  1. Date: 12/27/2013 7:50:00 PM

    Really a wonderful nature poem well done here, and thank you for your comments on my work also sorry so short but not feeling so well. cheri

  1. Date: 12/21/2013 9:38:00 PM

    Hi Linda, how I Love the rain, just to walk along and think as the rain falls upon me. I must look like an idiot though. This is one fine piece of poetry. How gently each picture is brought forth. The kaleidoscope of words painted into such a compellingly beautiful write. I shall walk in your rain any time. We do have gentle rain ocassionally.I really liked this one Linda. Bravo to you both. You have a wonderful Christmas and a happy New Year. I hope 2014 brings you all you seek. Yours...MIKE.

  1. Date: 12/20/2013 7:00:00 PM

    Lovely and compelling. Love the rain...Love the rain. Good job on this. xo Jon

  1. Date: 12/6/2013 1:30:00 PM

    How bright a piece with the earth element and love winding through this piece P D, really good reading today..!

  1. Date: 11/13/2013 9:53:00 AM

    A beautiful poem. Love and rain are a beautiful combination.

  1. Date: 10/28/2013 11:00:00 AM

    Glad to see you expanding into the sonnet form! [She listens to the soft and rhythmic thrum,] very nice metered line, a lovely feeling to speak! Light & Love

  1. Date: 10/27/2013 10:39:00 PM

    Vivid image with a sense of being tuned in with mother nature. You can feel the rain with each line. Job well done as always Linda, again, thanks for sharing.

  1. Date: 10/24/2013 4:32:00 AM

    "Till you I never saw the sunset on Biscayne -- Till you I never heard a gentle summer rain." -- This phrase from "Till You" was brought to mind. You have captured the essence of the beauty of just listening.... Love ya .... Jake

  1. Date: 10/23/2013 9:54:00 PM

    Such a wonderful feeling of being one with nature. Thank you for reminding I don't have to be on the edge all the time . It's good to just relax . Be happy;Michael

  1. Date: 10/5/2013 5:56:00 AM

    Hi Linda,Congratulation on your great win.Last two line are so strong.

  1. Date: 10/4/2013 6:47:00 PM

    A very beautifully written piece of poetry. Great team work! Congratulations to you both!

  1. Date: 10/3/2013 1:57:00 PM

    Way to go winning lady..Congrats..Sara

  1. Date: 10/3/2013 11:05:00 AM

    awesome ... lovely win............SKAT

  1. Date: 10/3/2013 6:32:00 AM

    Hi, my dearest sis! My BIGGEST HEARTY CONGRATULATIONS FOR YOUR 2nd time SUPER SHINING WIN ON THIS VERY PRECIOUS GEM & OUTSTANDING MASTERPIECE! Super big hugs again & cheers to U w/ our dear friend GV! By the way, thank u so much again for my great win in your contest. So glad you liked my a.m. due poem:) & thank u so much as well for appreciating my early b-day blogs for u. More super hugs w/ kisses fr me! May More blessings & graces keeps coming everyday in ur life & ur family!lovem4evr, Leo

  1. Date: 10/2/2013 7:02:00 PM

    outstanding collaboration between the two of you...congrats on your win :)

  1. Date: 10/1/2013 7:04:00 PM

    A breathtaking piece, you make a great team. Congratulations.

  1. Date: 10/1/2013 3:30:00 PM

    congrats on 3rd in team work contest Ty for entering

  1. Date: 9/29/2013 1:07:00 PM

    An exquisite sonnet, full of vibrant imagery and wonderful phrasing! Well done Linda!! Best wishes, Keith

  1. Date: 9/26/2013 10:12:00 PM

    How did this one ever get past me???

  1. Date: 9/26/2013 10:11:00 PM

    wowowow. PD. this is indeed metrical. How delightful a sonnet!!! A very well deserved win. Congrats to you.

  1. Date: 9/23/2013 5:40:00 AM

    Congrats on your winning work..Way to go!!!Sara

  1. Date: 9/22/2013 7:43:00 PM

    thank you G... your the best...Linda

  1. Date: 9/22/2013 9:17:00 AM

    Ohhh.... thanks for this beautiful sonnet PD,, such beautiful verse. Rhythmic and melodic flow of words... Grandios! Congrats on your fabulous win and I love you,,, always!!

  1. Date: 9/21/2013 11:49:00 PM

    Congratulations on your lovely sonnet and great win. Love,Jjoyce

  1. Date: 9/21/2013 10:35:00 PM

    It's again my great honor with extreme gratefulness and joy to read once again this super lovely and stupendous masterpiece of my greatest poet w/ another great poet here @ soup. Embracing its passion & perfection in every way. Thank u again evrso much. MY HUGE HEARTY CONGRATULATIONS ON YOUR WELL-DESERVED SUPER WIN MY DEAREST SIS! Kudos w/ Big sweet hugs to u & our dear friend, GV. Well, hope you're well. Have a gracefilled wkend to u & ur love ones! More hugs w/ smiles & kisses. lovem4evr,Leo

  1. Date: 9/21/2013 6:50:00 PM

    That is really tight rhythm. I really like this one.

  1. Date: 9/21/2013 9:21:00 AM

    Your poetry cannot go wrong........another beautifully penned work !! Congratulations PD.........so happy to share this place with your talent!

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