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Venetian Blind

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Venetian Blind

Peek, gentle whispers
What you seek of me, open
Your embrace, full mast

©Drake J. Eszes

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  1. Date: 3/29/2014 12:52:00 PM

    dont teasre me please me lol great play on words here loved imagery not always easy but you done very well here thanks for sharing and for your kind comment on my poem keep on sharing

    Eszes Avatar Drake Eszes Date: 3/29/2014 12:53:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Ha. Indeed! :) Thank you so much, Katherine! Awesome of you to stop by!
  1. Date: 3/2/2014 10:26:00 PM

    Lovely one, Drake.

    Eszes Avatar Drake Eszes Date: 3/2/2014 11:10:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Awesome! Thank you so much, Juliet! =)
  1. Date: 12/3/2013 5:01:00 AM

    Hello -yes it has been { AWHILE } and you are missed, I see you still have... A poetic "way with words" Such a unique style.

    Eszes Avatar Drake Eszes Date: 12/3/2013 6:27:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    WOO HOO! Hi there!! =D Thank you so much, Vicki. So nice to see you again!
  1. Date: 12/2/2013 8:45:00 AM

    I enjoyed this one again. Good morning.

    Eszes Avatar Drake Eszes Date: 12/2/2013 8:48:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Buenos Dias! =)
  1. Date: 9/25/2013 1:39:00 AM

    LOVE .. just LOVE your 'curtainS!!!!!' :-)

    Eszes Avatar Drake Eszes Date: 9/25/2013 5:50:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    =D That's cute. Thank you so much, Ellie!
  1. Date: 9/20/2013 10:20:00 AM

    Grasping the double meaning.

    Eszes Avatar Drake Eszes Date: 9/20/2013 11:09:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Indeed! Thanks, John!
  1. Date: 9/12/2013 7:38:00 AM

    Hey you!!! Turns out I'm not traveling this week end, so...about the show...SOUP MAIL! Only AFTER I read your new poem...BLACKMAIL! HA HA! You did promise today....I'm waiting.....as are others, Go on!!! HURRY!

    Eszes Avatar Drake Eszes Date: 9/12/2013 7:54:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    ;-) Awesome. It's posted now. =D
  1. Date: 9/3/2013 7:09:00 PM

    Ahhh the peek...whispers..someone shy? Full mast..maybe not!...:-)

    Eszes Avatar Drake Eszes Date: 9/3/2013 7:23:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Ha. Maybe, maybe not...thank you, Donna! :)
  1. Date: 9/3/2013 6:32:00 AM

    Revisiting..rereading..till something new is posted?..This is a beauty..From our venetian blinds one will see only rain today..but i love the patter of rain as much as peeping sunrays : )

    Eszes Avatar Drake Eszes Date: 9/3/2013 7:28:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Yes, we had rain here also. It seems to be better today. The raindrops of Fall. It was beautiful. Thank you so much, Charmaine. Something new today.... ;-)
  1. Date: 9/3/2013 4:42:00 AM

    Your talent amazes me...to take a mundane object and infuse it with such life!

    Eszes Avatar Drake Eszes Date: 9/3/2013 7:25:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    It's called being slightly bored at work. ;-) If work wasn't injecting me with life, I had to take charge. lol Thanks so much, Monterey!
  1. Date: 9/2/2013 11:32:00 PM

    Wonderful piece!

    Eszes Avatar Drake Eszes Date: 9/3/2013 7:21:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Hi & thank you, Beverly!! =)
  1. Date: 9/2/2013 5:29:00 PM

    Drake I love it excellent Senryu Shadow x smile

    Eszes Avatar Drake Eszes Date: 9/3/2013 7:19:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    =) Thank you so much, Shadow! I hope things are getting better with you!
  1. Date: 9/2/2013 4:27:00 PM

    Whoa..I felt that embrace. This one gave me chills. Beautiful senryu! Always, Laura

    Eszes Avatar Drake Eszes Date: 9/2/2013 4:32:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Hey there, Laura!! =D Thank you so much. I hope you get warmer soon from those chills. :)
  1. Date: 9/2/2013 1:36:00 PM

    the venetion blind is now closed for viewing, lol... meaning, got a new one?... break a leg, drake.. hi!... :) huggs

    Eszes Avatar Drake Eszes Date: 9/2/2013 1:51:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    LOL! Adorable. Thank you so much, Nette. Possibly tomorrow. ;-)
  1. Date: 9/2/2013 1:06:00 AM

    I see you are up late as well. Hope you are enjoying your weekend.

    Eszes Avatar Drake Eszes Date: 9/2/2013 1:08:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Not for much longer. :) I did. I hope you did too, Richard!
  1. Date: 9/1/2013 1:53:00 AM

    A powerful senryu ablaze with love. Thank you so much for sharing my dear friend, Drake. Thank you so much for your nice comments on my poems as well ! Have a blessed wkend! love lots and big hugs, Leonora

    Eszes Avatar Drake Eszes Date: 9/2/2013 12:38:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Hey Leonora!!!! Thank you very much for that! =D I hope you had a great weekend too!
  1. Date: 8/31/2013 8:40:00 AM

    3 lines....a world of love within....remarkable!

    Eszes Avatar Drake Eszes Date: 8/31/2013 9:18:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Jimbo!!! =D Thank you so much.
  1. Date: 8/30/2013 3:07:00 PM

    - You hit the nail on the head in three lines, Drake.- Well done ! - Have a great weekend! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

    Eszes Avatar Drake Eszes Date: 8/31/2013 9:17:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Hammer down! =D Thanks very much, Anne Lise.
  1. Date: 8/30/2013 2:06:00 PM

    Love it, love it. Love you for always commenting on my poems. "History" was for my Prizewinning artist friend. I asked her to do full body portrait of me IF I could afford her fee. She said, Write me a poem, and I will do the portrait. I sat for it in Winter Haven last weekend.

    Eszes Avatar Drake Eszes Date: 8/30/2013 2:09:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    That's wonderful!!! Working together and achieving goals together. What a beautiful thing. I'm glad to be able to check your work out. You're a terrific writer. :) I'm very grateful you stopped by here!
  1. Date: 8/30/2013 12:57:00 PM

    I like the skill in which you wrote this, very good poem my man!!! MC

    Eszes Avatar Drake Eszes Date: 8/30/2013 2:03:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Hey Marquis! Nice to meet you. Many thanks to you for that! :)
  1. Date: 8/30/2013 11:47:00 AM

    Beautiful three lines D, xxx

    Eszes Avatar Drake Eszes Date: 8/30/2013 12:06:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Awesome. Thank you kindly, Rose! =D
  1. Date: 8/30/2013 11:07:00 AM

    Excellent way to embrace beautifully penned. Loved always, bl

    Eszes Avatar Drake Eszes Date: 8/30/2013 12:06:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Hey, BL!!! Thanks so much! =D
  1. Date: 8/30/2013 10:00:00 AM

    awsome final line, with that totally open embrace. Love it.

    Eszes Avatar Drake Eszes Date: 8/30/2013 12:06:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you very much, Andrea. It's all about the embrace. :)
  1. Date: 8/30/2013 9:17:00 AM

    So few words, so much said in them :) Love it! Thanks for stopping by & for the feedback :)

    Eszes Avatar Drake Eszes Date: 8/30/2013 9:32:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Hi & you're very welcome. Thank you, also, for stopping by here, Melani. =D
  1. Date: 8/30/2013 7:19:00 AM

    Slowly unfolding the crevice of something hidden, only because we refuse to really see.. Enjoyed this too Drake, so many different ways to interpret.. I might be off target lol, I have another analyses too! :)

    Eszes Avatar Drake Eszes Date: 8/30/2013 7:34:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    You're certainly not off, Wilma. ;-) I definitely appreciate you coming by here, as usual. =)
  1. Date: 8/30/2013 4:59:00 AM

    I didn't see your name in the new poems...Was this yesterday? I was busy with cooking for an invite! I CAME LOOKING FOR YOU...and VOILA! New poem...beautiful in every way...enticing, engaging, enigmatic....Am I being effusive? You deserve it! ;) WOW! :)

    Eszes Avatar Drake Eszes Date: 8/30/2013 6:15:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Hi there, Eileen! Yes, it was yesterday. No worries. You stopped by here and I'm grateful for that. Effusive? Yes. You're way too kind. :) Thank you so much.
  1. Date: 8/30/2013 2:35:00 AM

    this is what i call the unfolding... a gradual slide that slowly opens , then spreads out like a wide fan ... what a way to express a full embrace!... you nailed it, drake!...:) huggs

    Eszes Avatar Drake Eszes Date: 8/30/2013 6:13:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    A strong way to look at it, yes. :) Thank you so very much, Nette. I hope you had a wonderful vacation.
  1. Date: 8/29/2013 11:55:00 PM

    Open up I am, Drake

    Eszes Avatar Drake Eszes Date: 8/30/2013 12:48:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Hey there!!! It's been forever & a day! Thanks & great to see you around again!
  1. Date: 8/29/2013 7:01:00 PM

    Can't top the below comments, another exquisite piece.

    Eszes Avatar Drake Eszes Date: 8/30/2013 12:47:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    =D Many thanks, Richard! I do appreciate that!
  1. Date: 8/29/2013 6:24:00 PM

    Couldn't possibly write anything more appropriate than Charmaine's assessment of your senyru! Kudos my good friend! Cheers... Jake

    Eszes Avatar Drake Eszes Date: 8/30/2013 12:47:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    :) Thank you so much, Jack. Cheers to you!
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