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by Gary Player

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  1. Date: 9/13/2013 12:55:00 PM
    This is a cool piece, and humorous to boot. I enjoy a good, light-hearted read. Only problems is that you have "wreaks" and I think you meant "wrecks". Also loved that you used the word "eschew". Fun read; kudos! :)

    Cavanaugh Avatar Jon A Cavanaugh
    Date: 9/13/2013 7:43:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you, will fix right away
  1. Date: 9/8/2013 1:17:00 PM
    love the rhymes in this one, especially "service" and "nervous." brilliant!

    Cavanaugh Avatar Jon A Cavanaugh
    Date: 9/8/2013 9:20:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you ilene
  1. Date: 8/31/2013 5:26:00 PM
    good grief, how many of your poems have I been missing? this is outstanding wit!! a fave on this.

    Cavanaugh Avatar Jon A Cavanaugh
    Date: 9/1/2013 12:48:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    thank you. you are too kind.
  1. Date: 8/29/2013 11:59:00 PM
    Yes, I agree we got to stop quirks

    Cavanaugh Avatar Jon A Cavanaugh
    Date: 8/31/2013 10:55:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    thank you
  1. Date: 8/29/2013 9:43:00 AM
    Ah yes! I have a few nervous quirks. Drives my husband crazy! I enjoyed reading your poem, Jon! Love, Kim

    Cavanaugh Avatar Jon A Cavanaugh
    Date: 8/31/2013 10:55:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    thank you