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In the Silence

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In the Silence

Breaking through her reserve
She undresses the longing in her eyes
A promise of surrender

She is aware her message has been received 
By the knowing smile on his lips
His eyes already claiming her
Disrobing her
Caressing her

Suddenly shy, she lowers her dark lashes
Trying to find safe ground again
But it’s too late
He knows…he KNOWS

He leans in to her to whisper in her hair
To clothe his desire in words
But momentarily is arrested
By the sensual scent that envelopes her, enflaming him
Surprised by the silence, her head turns towards him

A unplanned meeting of lips
Inhibitions and questions….lost in soft exhange
Words never spoken
Yet passion’s eloquence clearly heard
In the silence

Eileen Manassian Ghali

For Nette's Sensual Contest: TOO LATE!!! Can't find it! :(
August 29, 2013

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  1. Date: 8/30/2013 8:17:00 AM

    Yes a very good write indeed. Thanks for your visit this morning.

    Ghali Avatar Eileen Ghali Date: 8/31/2013 2:34:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    :) I'm glad...........
    Lamoureux Avatar Richard Lamoureux Date: 8/31/2013 6:48:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    That makes my day.
    Ghali Avatar Eileen Ghali Date: 8/30/2013 8:57:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    No need to thank me....I look for your poems...When you don't post, something is missing in my day! Now...ain't that the truth! :)
  1. Date: 8/30/2013 8:03:00 AM

    Reads like a would be winner to me..Sorry it was late..At least it is here for all of us to enjoy..Sara

    Ghali Avatar Eileen Ghali Date: 8/30/2013 8:56:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    :) Thanks, my dear sweet Sara....
  1. Date: 8/30/2013 3:38:00 AM

    Sorry this was late, Eileen, I'm sure it would have been a winner. Very nicely done.

    Ghali Avatar Eileen Ghali Date: 8/30/2013 8:56:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Awwwwww.....thanks, Becca! Sweet of you!
  1. Date: 8/30/2013 3:09:00 AM

    eilleen!.. this is subtly sensual with slow-fire imprints so flawlessly done.. ohh, i wish you entered this!... a winning gem!..:) huggs!

    Ghali Avatar Eileen Ghali Date: 8/30/2013 3:20:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    I was late!!! :( SO sorry.....! Hugs!
  1. Date: 8/29/2013 7:52:00 PM

    Hi Eileen, no new poems today? I hope you are enjoying your day whatever you are doing.

    Ghali Avatar Eileen Ghali Date: 8/30/2013 2:55:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    LONG day, Richard...Had visitors over for supper, so had to shop in the morning, cook all afternoon, and drop in the evening! ;) I'll get around to one soon! Missed a poem??? That's nice!
  1. Date: 8/29/2013 8:13:00 AM

    "Unplanned meeting of lips", those are the most exciting moments. A test of how good your heart rate is, when under all that anxious pressure. =D Massively sensual piece!

    Ghali Avatar Eileen Ghali Date: 8/30/2013 2:56:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Massively sensual piece!!!! ME LIKES! :)
  1. Date: 8/29/2013 7:24:00 AM

    Phew! Passionate? A resounding YES! Teach is teaching us about love as only she knows how. I am so so so impressed my dear friend! Big warm huggs from across the seas xoxox

    Ghali Avatar Eileen Ghali Date: 8/30/2013 2:56:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    :) Can't get out of that role..TEACH...I like that term! Thanks, Kenny! Hugs for you and yours! :)
  1. Date: 8/29/2013 7:20:00 AM

    What a shame! This is soft and sensual, i was swept along by your words.

    Ghali Avatar Eileen Ghali Date: 8/30/2013 8:55:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Think I had a CHANCE....????
    Ghali Avatar Eileen Ghali Date: 8/30/2013 2:59:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Think I had a change, Richard? :( I don't now what took me so long to write it. Thanks for getting swept along...that means it was a good write! HUGS
  1. Date: 8/29/2013 2:19:00 AM

    Hi Eileen, A well crafted and romantic write..I liked this one from you.. Ken

    Ghali Avatar Eileen Ghali Date: 8/30/2013 2:57:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks, Ken. You know all about romance! Your poems are full of romantic lines and thoughts, so this post is wonderful. Thanks
  1. Date: 8/29/2013 1:30:00 AM

    - Beautiful and romantic poem Eileen. - Always nice to read thing of beauty. - Hope your day will be fine. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

    Ghali Avatar Eileen Ghali Date: 8/30/2013 2:58:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    :) Ah....you are a thing of beauty, my dear....Thank you. Hope all is well with you! Hugs!