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TALE

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TALE

T he story of two brothers who fought for their country,

A ll wars did they fight with valour to victory,

L ife did give them honour and ranks,

E nd of the day life gave them only sorrows and regrets.

A~D

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  1. Date: 9/2/2013 11:10:00 AM
    Great work ! - Sekar

    Danie Avatar Allen Danie
    Date: 9/9/2013 9:53:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    thank you Sekar.. :) A~D
  1. Date: 8/31/2013 9:43:00 AM
    - Well done, Allen ! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

    Danie Avatar Allen Danie
    Date: 8/31/2013 4:31:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thnku Anne for the review.... :) A~D
  1. Date: 8/29/2013 8:44:00 AM
    A very well written tale which you summed up well in just four lines. Nicely done! Hugs

    Danie Avatar Allen Danie
    Date: 8/29/2013 12:27:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Cecilia... :) A~D
  1. Date: 8/29/2013 1:48:00 AM
    Welcome to the Soup. Good poetry - "valour to Victory" - Thank you. G.

    Danie Avatar Allen Danie
    Date: 8/29/2013 2:10:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you G... :) A~D
  1. Date: 8/28/2013 11:12:00 PM
    A NICE TTALE ALLEN TRULY BEAUTIFUL ~V~

    Danie Avatar Allen Danie
    Date: 8/28/2013 11:16:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Vinayak.... :) A~D