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Dawn

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Dawn

There was truth.
As I watched you there.
In the comfort of strangers.
Except they were not strangers.
Like a dream within a dream.
You felt yourself sinking with in the fire.
One life of many, you played in all life.
Do you even have a soul to be saved ?
I watch you dance around the fire.
I see your skirt has caught fire.
As you swim among the angels light.
I see some truth within your light.
Though you live beyond the edge of night.
Waiting there for your prince to come.
Dancing on the edge of time.
Dancing closer to the fire.
Giants of old have come crashing down.
The end is coming soon, hear the trumpets sound.
Waiting for the dawn to come back around.

Wed 9am   8/ 28/ 2013

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  1. Date: 5/28/2014 8:52:00 AM
    a thrilling poem Debbie superbly penned hugs

  1. Date: 1/10/2014 4:22:00 PM
    Debbie, .. I posted a new poem would you like to take a trip and read my poem..... You will find your name on my latest... hehehehHeheheh, WARNNING!!! It is a long poem... :) :) LINDA

  1. Date: 9/30/2013 5:05:00 PM
    I was captivated by the mystical quality in this. Seems to be an eerie sense of conflict within the self in this one. How will we be judged in the final hour?

  1. Date: 9/16/2013 6:05:00 PM
    This is sad but well written I am part native american and we believe that the end will being a new age of mankind an age of enlightenment and hope. thank you for your comments on my work friend.

  1. Date: 9/15/2013 1:16:00 AM
    love it ,nothing more to say master in all xxxx duncan

    Duncan Avatar Debbie Duncan
    Date: 9/15/2013 1:42:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you ;}
  1. Date: 9/7/2013 8:10:00 AM
    Also the top of your head is red--kind of like the sun coming up after an all night party to light things up. You are sunshine! I had to say it.

    Duncan Avatar Debbie Duncan
    Date: 9/7/2013 2:22:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    thank you Duke ;}
  1. Date: 9/7/2013 8:08:00 AM
    Debbie, you definitely have a style all your own. It's very enjoyable to read and let the words create an image in my mind. On its face, this is about the end of night. And this happens over and over. I have never thought of anything quite like this and it is a charming insight into the way you view the world. It is complex and mystifying I do admit. You have something very special. Thank-you for all your comments. It means a lot to me.

    Duncan Avatar Debbie Duncan
    Date: 9/7/2013 8:54:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    I haven't seen you for a while,, thank you for reading , as always ;}
  1. Date: 9/6/2013 1:21:00 PM
    Hi Debbie; I like your poem. It reminds me of something I saw on the news the other night. Somewhere I think was in Peru that people are hearing some strange sounds - like trumpets are being played and we could hear them, but no one know where the sound is coming from. They think it could be the Angels already playing the trumpets. thanks for sharing... Lucilla

    Duncan Avatar Debbie Duncan
    Date: 9/7/2013 9:24:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Lucilla ,,,, I heard/ read on u tube. the first trumpet sounded in 2008 ;}
  1. Date: 9/4/2013 4:12:00 PM
    A reflective essence upon itself. Awaiting to be taken down off it's shelf. A wonderful dance into the night Debbie. Peace. :)

  1. Date: 9/4/2013 10:09:00 AM
    Great imagery. Your pieces always make us stop and think.

    Duncan Avatar Debbie Duncan
    Date: 9/4/2013 10:33:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Carol ;}
  1. Date: 9/1/2013 11:59:00 AM
    Nice imagery, Debbie...love it... Terry

    Duncan Avatar Debbie Duncan
    Date: 9/1/2013 1:46:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Terry ;}
  1. Date: 8/30/2013 5:50:00 PM
    Nicely done Debbie. The ending is good.

    Duncan Avatar Debbie Duncan
    Date: 9/1/2013 10:56:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you ;}
  1. Date: 8/30/2013 9:41:00 AM
    wow, awesome write, Debbie

    Duncan Avatar Debbie Duncan
    Date: 9/1/2013 1:46:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Jack ;}
  1. Date: 8/30/2013 9:30:00 AM
    Indeed it is dramatic and spiritual as well. Very nicely done, Debbie.

    Duncan Avatar Debbie Duncan
    Date: 9/7/2013 2:21:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Andrea ;}
  1. Date: 8/29/2013 10:24:00 PM
    Hi Debbie, A well crafted spiritual write...Thanks for sharing.. Ken

    Duncan Avatar Debbie Duncan
    Date: 8/29/2013 10:28:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Ken ;}
  1. Date: 8/29/2013 8:18:00 PM
    yes waiting for the end to come, the lord of hosts returns for some, fulfil the prophesy, its about, return he will there is no doubt, Apocalypse thou ... Don re : "Dawn" Debbie Duncan

  1. Date: 8/29/2013 6:47:00 PM
    Very expressive and creative work that you have penned in this one..I am glad that I chose it to read today..Thanks for the visit to my work..I am glad that you liked the song that I suggested..Sara

  1. Date: 8/29/2013 6:15:00 PM
    Great ending kiddo! A totally amazing effort... big warm hugs xoxox

    Duncan Avatar Debbie Duncan
    Date: 8/29/2013 6:34:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Jack
  1. Date: 8/29/2013 3:06:00 PM
    Such an excellent write Debbie, you are an amazing writer. thanks for sharing....Peter

    Duncan Avatar Debbie Duncan
    Date: 8/29/2013 3:39:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Peter ;}
  1. Date: 8/29/2013 8:46:00 AM
    HIghly intense & hard hitting! The horn of judgment sounds strongly. Fantastic.

    Duncan Avatar Debbie Duncan
    Date: 8/29/2013 5:01:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    I thank you Drake ;}
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