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Re-Awakened - Team Work Contest Poem 1

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Re-Awakened - Team Work Contest Poem 1

                                           

                                             Her heart stirred, she smiled
                                             looking at the face she loved.
                                             His eyes mirrored hope
                                             remembering their lost love
                                             crushed by fate, re-awakened

                                             Penned on 26/08/2013 using
                                             Form :  Tanka  by
                                             Wayland Bunch and Seren Roberts
                                             Contest  :   Team Work

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  1. Date: 8/28/2013 4:49:00 PM
    Seren, you and Wayland did a great job collaborating together on this tanka. I enjoy it when people collaborate, so hopefully this contest will inspire more collaborative pieces as lovely(Yes! Again I used "lovely" in a comment! Almost amazing, eh? -- Ha!)as this tanka.

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts
    Date: 8/28/2013 6:27:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Chris thank you so much for your comment ..Seren
  1. Date: 8/28/2013 3:59:00 PM
    This is so beautiful, such a gorgeous write my friend! I really enjoyed reading this enlightening poem this evening! What a powerful piece, I just love the tenderness that's all about it! Great Work!!

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts
    Date: 8/28/2013 4:18:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Russell......Seren
  1. Date: 8/28/2013 3:55:00 PM
    I love the line 'his eyes mirrored hope'..Gives me the deep feel of re awekining and new beginnings to same old flames..Lovely.

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts
    Date: 8/28/2013 4:18:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks Charmaine for your kind comment ...Seren