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Deep cold

From the darkness 
Staring into the candle 
Love's light flickers 
In teardrops falling 
A child who plays 
sick games 

Who needs 
to grow up 
Hiding in lies 
A cold hearted liar 
Black dark clouds 
Hang ore 

When the dragon speaks 
Flames upon the words 
Ash remains 
I already spoke 
To you as a friend 

Told you 
how I was getting on 
Talking to your mother 
Joking and laughing 
My heart softened 
Touched me 
Very deeply 

After finding out 
A completely 
different story 
I get the message 
Loud and crystal 
Blue clear awakening 

Cold to the bone 
I have no clue 
Who you are anymore 
Cruel in what you done 
Sick cruel joke 

Makes the skin crawl 
How low one can stoop 
Almost low enough 
Like a snake 
To feel the need 
to hurt me more 

Taking your latest conquest 
260 miles south 
Headed north 
My cousins home 
Family owned land 

Sleeping 
in my home place 
Everything about it 
drew heaven 
Now you need help 
As I know 

you are on a different planet 
I just can not believe 
How cold you got 
No turning back 
A complete stranger 
Would treat 
someone better

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  1. Date: 9/1/2013 8:30:00 PM
    I can relate to this poem for sure. It is heartbreaking when we find out how cold our loved ones can be sometimes. Like they have changed into someone unrecognizable....You write with such depth, Liam, it's amazing! Great poem here. My poem titled, "Love Bites", has a very similar theme to this one.

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    Date: 9/7/2013 4:12:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    THANK YOU EVER SO DEEPLY FOR THE AMAZING BEAUTIFUL COMMENT APPRECIATED DEEPLY