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The Scene of the Crime

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The Scene of the Crime

My broken Heart, ripped from my chest-
Just kill it now, and give it rest
I might survive; I hope, at best
Will I prevail or fail this Quest?

And how will I ease my worried Mind?
For tranquility I never find
Oh, will I lose this Soul of mine?
(Loving you is passion's Crime)

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  1. Date: 8/28/2013 7:06:00 PM
    WOW! I have been there my friend...many of us have...best of luck Kelli

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    Date: 8/29/2013 8:53:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Many thanks for the read and review, Kelli; thanks for stopping by :)
  1. Date: 8/28/2013 5:09:00 PM
    Excellent write, I loved it....Peter

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    Date: 8/29/2013 8:53:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you for the kind words, Peter :)
  1. Date: 8/28/2013 3:37:00 PM
    You make your dark subjects glow... A very talented expression to the absence of tranquility and evasive love...definite crimes in my book :)

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    Date: 8/29/2013 8:56:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you for always making me smile and feel good about my work, Karen. You've made my morning :)