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Pretty Ponies

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Pretty Ponies


I thought there would be pretty ponies Ponies to carry me around the bend But I find there are no ponies at all Only empty wishes at the end...

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  1. Date: 8/30/2013 12:39:00 PM
    Oh........this is as sweet as it comes......the realities of life coming true!

  1. Date: 8/30/2013 10:13:00 AM
    I am with Frank. LOVE this.

  1. Date: 8/29/2013 8:23:00 PM
    It's never too late for the ponies! Enjoyed your poem. Warm thoughts, Ralph

  1. Date: 8/29/2013 6:44:00 AM
    Cute one..I feel some sadness there..Life can issue out some sad surprises sometimes..Thanks for the visit..Your comments are always uplifting...Sara

  1. Date: 8/29/2013 2:10:00 AM
    Hi Barbara, I liked this creative write..Thanks for stopping by my work.. Regards, Ken