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Torn

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Torn

I can’t change/You can’t change/We are Two separate/ people with Two separate  hearts when did this road shred apart/ 

I can’t force this love anymore/ I am lost in deep thought / Emotional pain hurts/ but  when you Add mental games/ and a teaspoon of lies/ It’s just ugly as a newborn cries for help

 This broken heart lingers woman/ I am tired/ Trying to piece this love hate relationship  together/ it’s so torn in  pieces I can’t pinpoint the location/ we are too far apart / Now  longitude and latitude can’t place us together/broken hearts/ Frustrating tears/ 

Now it’s  two separate lines/ two different directions/ do you see my reflection/ reflect off this glass mirror/ Now look at my torn face as sweats falls off my face/ Tears in my eyes a whale can swim/ It’s frustrating to find a answer/ At first I couldn’t sleep/ lonely night  became very dark / but now start to feel like Morning’s  are my best sunshine

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  1. Date: 9/26/2013 4:36:00 PM
    so much here. Very thought provoking. Profound also.. Enjoyed the read! Cindy

  1. Date: 9/11/2013 10:32:00 AM
    such an honest, reeling piece expressing separate yet unique ways of affecting life and love... hope lights up in the end... marvelous, christopher!..:) huggs and welcome to soup..

  1. Date: 9/10/2013 10:02:00 AM
    Good; You are getting on with your life. There is a saying - don't ever cry for someone that won't cry for you. Time has a way of setting things straight. Somethings are just not ment to be. Smile - tomorrow is a brand new day.... Lucilla

  1. Date: 9/7/2013 9:09:00 PM
    nice poem

    michaels Avatar christopher michaels
    Date: 9/10/2013 12:23:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    thanks, Check out my poem "Sand Castle"
  1. Date: 9/4/2013 10:32:00 AM
    Quite a descriptive piece... Very Good work. Welcome to Poetry Soup.

    michaels Avatar christopher michaels
    Date: 9/10/2013 12:23:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    thanks, Check out my poem "Sand Castle"
  1. Date: 8/29/2013 3:15:00 AM
    - Very deep thoughts in your poem, well written .... touching. - All the best to you Christopher ! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

    michaels Avatar christopher michaels
    Date: 9/10/2013 12:23:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    thanks, Check out my poem "Sand Castle"
  1. Date: 8/28/2013 9:04:00 AM
    You have a gift to express. I think this is beautiful. It's strange how much easier it is for one to create pain on a page rather than joy.

    michaels Avatar christopher michaels
    Date: 9/10/2013 12:23:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    thanks, Check out my poem "Sand Castle"