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MATE- Not for Contest

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MATE- Not for Contest

M ystical flaring~~~
 ~~~of body and soul
A lluring oneness~~~
~~~not broken but whole
T ime lies unmeasured~~~
 ~~~in torrid embrace
E xquisite rapture~~~ 
~~~shines out from each face

Eileen Manassian Ghali

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  1. Date: 8/29/2013 5:19:00 PM
    Should this not be mystical flaring, excellent follow on from your muse. Take care, Richard

    Celeste Avatar Jade Celeste
    Date: 8/30/2013 2:44:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    OK...took your advice MR Seal....mystical flaring it is! :) I wrote this one first, to be honest. I hadn't read the directions for the contest and wanted something no one would think of....AFTER I wrote it, I realize there were words to choose from so I went for MUSE. Mr. SEAL....THAT was a follow up on THIS! :)
  1. Date: 8/28/2013 10:45:00 PM
    WOW, This acrostic is awesome. The rhyme is superb and the vivid description of a mated union is simply incredible. You have outdone yourself Eileen. Of all your work that I have read this is my favorite so far. I am blown away by this poem.

    Celeste Avatar Jade Celeste
    Date: 8/30/2013 2:45:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    WOW! Thanks Jon....This is lovely praise and makes me very happy! :) Glad you like this.....Hope you land on your feet soon! ;)
  1. Date: 8/28/2013 9:24:00 PM
    HI Eileen, Enjoyed this creative acrostic..Thanks for sharing.. Ken..

    Celeste Avatar Jade Celeste
    Date: 8/30/2013 2:45:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Ken, thanks for the visit. Glad you find it enjoyable!
  1. Date: 8/28/2013 5:21:00 PM
    lovely acrostic... happy with my mate... hugs... Linda

    Celeste Avatar Jade Celeste
    Date: 8/30/2013 2:46:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    :) Glad you are...:) Thanks for the lovely visit! Hugs!
  1. Date: 8/28/2013 4:42:00 PM
    Ahh!! I like this one..Enjoyed reading it this evening..Very creative..Thanks for the visit to my work..Sara

    Celeste Avatar Jade Celeste
    Date: 8/30/2013 2:48:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    :) ALWAYS a pleasure, Sara!
  1. Date: 8/28/2013 3:35:00 PM
    Hi Eileen, my poem is finished now, have another look.

    Celeste Avatar Jade Celeste
    Date: 8/30/2013 2:48:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    I did....I like it! :) The FINAL version! :) How did you find the words to describe that painting so well. Amazing!
  1. Date: 8/28/2013 3:12:00 PM
    ahhh, I hope your other one is as lovely!!! glad to see you get inspired by a four letter word! I read what you said in Frank's blog. it's scary what is going on and especially if it's all contrived?? Soup mail me if you know any details that are being hidden from the public. I am so curious about these things.

    Celeste Avatar Jade Celeste
    Date: 8/30/2013 2:50:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Oh dear...my husband is a news buff...He watches the news whenever he gets the chance, and the radio blares it all all night while we sleep! ;) Ok...he does have it on low, but...seriously, imagine waking up to that? Oh well, it could take pages...I will ask him for some info when he gets home and get bake to ya.
  1. Date: 8/28/2013 1:11:00 PM
    Great poem Miss Ghali.

    Celeste Avatar Jade Celeste
    Date: 8/30/2013 2:52:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you, Ayesha! :) Thanks for visiting...
  1. Date: 8/28/2013 12:40:00 PM
    Wow Eileen....maybe I should have asked for the clone of this mate instead of the muse, can I have both of them all rolled up in one? : ) This one ROCKS as well! Well done! Hugs

    Celeste Avatar Jade Celeste
    Date: 8/30/2013 2:52:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    YOU WISH!!!! Don't we all! :) Thanks every so much, Cecilia...love your uplifting posts!
  1. Date: 8/28/2013 9:00:00 AM
    Mmmhm!!! Diggin' this one! "Time lies unmeasured in torrid embrace", yes!

    Celeste Avatar Jade Celeste
    Date: 8/30/2013 2:53:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    YES!!!! :) Diggin is great! :)
  1. Date: 8/28/2013 7:00:00 AM
    This is cool how you formatted this one.

    Celeste Avatar Jade Celeste
    Date: 8/30/2013 2:47:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    :) Thanks, Richard......
  1. Date: 8/28/2013 5:32:00 AM
    As your second viewer, am I privileged too??? LOL Hope this day is filled with joy and happiness... love ya! Warm cuddles xoxoxox

    Celeste Avatar Jade Celeste
    Date: 8/30/2013 2:40:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    ALWAYS...second third fourth....always privileged, my dear! Cuddles back at ya!
  1. Date: 8/28/2013 12:34:00 AM
    am your first viewer........

    Celeste Avatar Jade Celeste
    Date: 8/28/2013 12:38:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    What a privilege! :) Hope you liked it!