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i dont know about you

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i dont know about you

this is for all the DECENT ladies out there...
i dont know about you, but im sick of being second choice to skeezy women
i dont know about you, but when i have a boyfriend i just get sick of livin
i dont know about you, but i know about me
and this girl here,shes sick of the pleas
sick of the bullshit, sick of the crap
sick of all the "friends" who talk behind my back
sick of it all, sick of everything
and with this feeling, positive im supposed to bring?
im sick of being told "its my outlook on life"
youre so negative, you make your own strife
i dont know about you, but its not MY atatood
it all the ugliness in this sick twisted world
and i dont know about you, but im fed up
i dont about you but i give up
i dont know about you, but im done feeling the way i do
and i dont know about you, but then again i think i do
you pick yourself apart, about all your flaws
and when they cheat and lie, it just instills that further,its a law
i dont know about you, but i think i do
you're the girl, much like myself
with a good heart and a bad sense of health
build us up, tear us down
i dont know about you, but i really think i am going crazy
i dont know about you, but i think theyre all lazy
too lazy to try, too lazy to care
too lazy to give a shit, but the energy shows up when in satans lair
no more loyalty, to get kicked in the teeth
no more "friends" who just make you weep
no more crap, and no more forgiving
no more forgetting and NO MORE RE LIVING.
im not settling, i have enough of "so-so" to last my whole life
and i dont know about you girls, but it ends tonight.
we stop picking ourselves apart, we stop blaming ourselves
we stop thinking our little "flaws" ar why they did this
when its about someone else
its about them, the people they choose to be around
and quite frankly, before id be around THEM id be buried in the ground.
alive.
yes i hate them that much
and i dont know about you, but i have had enough
i wont blame myself, when skeezy outdoes classy
i wont blame myself for the hilariously tacky
things i see, on a daily basis
and i dont know about you
but i too, can fake it.
see its harder for me,to be mean like you all are
im not built that way, and being mean hurts my heart
so no i cant do the revenge thing
but what i can do is protect myself again
i dont know about you, but its long overdue
i DO know about you...because i AM you.
you are not alone.

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  1. Date: 3/23/2014 8:46:00 PM
    Harsh, but creative write! Many lines in here I've said to myself at times.... Thanks for sharing Brittany!

  1. Date: 10/23/2013 3:30:00 PM
    Hi Brittany, A heartfelt write.. Ken

  1. Date: 9/15/2013 3:20:00 PM
    very strong pain write ,straight to the point tina x

    Carroll Avatar Brittany Carroll
    Date: 9/17/2013 4:36:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    ty :) i greatly appreciate it
  1. Date: 8/28/2013 9:16:00 AM
    Strong & powerful message here. Great job w/your expressions. Very direct.

    Carroll Avatar Brittany Carroll
    Date: 9/15/2013 2:50:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    ty so much i appreciate that
  1. Date: 8/27/2013 9:45:00 PM
    WELL WRITTEN GOIN TO MY FAVE HOPE TO SEE MORE ~v~

    Carroll Avatar Brittany Carroll
    Date: 9/15/2013 2:50:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    ty very much that means alot