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Steal Away the Pain

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Steal Away the Pain

Steal away the pain
I’m wrecked-up…my blood drips like rain
I want to let you know that I miss you…
Lift me high off the ground and wipe away the blue

Steal away the pain 
I’m screwed-up…my hair is sopping wet…I’m waiting for it to drain
I want to let you know that I love you…
Lift me higher than the roof above our heads – don’t you get the clue?

Feel your way out of the maze
I want you to steal away the pain
Feel your way out of the maze
And don’t look back…there’s plenty of hope to gain

Steal away the pain…wipe away the blue
I have barely anymore strength to carry you…
I want to let you know that I don’t hate you…
I’ll lift you higher than heaven’s height 
And erase the rue 

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  1. Date: 8/28/2013 5:19:00 PM

    Nicely penned with deep and profound meaning throughout. David, you have a way with words. Have a great day. Hugs, Gail